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Title: One minor problem
Reviewed By: Dacl73 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2005 20:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have just one Minor Problem with your fic. The Name isn't Zander it is Xander, as in short for Alaxander
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Reviewed By: fallenangel7583 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2004 01:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awsome mix of the two stories. a little confused over the invisible demon or for that matter inuyasha's quick pick up on english but hey, i'm not complaining. i think inuyasha needs to mouth off to buffy more though...that would be intesting. (i'm a big fan of both shows, so definatly a great job on the mixing of the two). but yeah, i would say let inuyasha's attitude run vampid to see what situation that would put them all into.
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Reviewed By: Okaasan-7 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2004 21:00 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Comment/Review:
I'm enjoying the story, really I am but the spelling could use some work. It' distracting to have to figure out what word you really mean. Are the little creatures very angry or are they fuzzy? that kind of thing. However, regardless of the spelling I will be reading the future chapters.
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Reviewed By: Aitu [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2004 11:07 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yey!! you have returned, Loved the chapter. So when are Inu and Kags finally going to hook up? lol. I hope that you keep writing more chapters soon because I love this story! Keep up the great work!
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Reviewed By: buffaholic On: August 11, 2004 21:24 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hey, yo yur fallin quite behind schedule here. Where's your muse? i reeeally seriously hope you update soon, im sure quite a few people have been waiting. i guess there's not much to say but please hurry and im sure yur next chapter will be great!
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Title: Chapter 8
Reviewed By: Eleature [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2004 13:58 CDT
Comment/Review:
HAHAHA! This chapter was brilliant! I like that you are able to keep the humor from Buffy in this story. You are really creative and I hope you'll update soon. I can't wait to read more and find out if the Jewel will make a difference when it's in Sunnydale. Will they somehow find some shards too? It could happen. I love your story. Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: buffaholic On: August 03, 2004 19:55 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Heeeeeeey! it's about that time again, you neeeeeed to update = D i've been waiting and i cannot wait much more, update update update!! i'll be chekcing quite regularly now lol, so yur going to have lots of fun hahhahaha. So hurry up you slacker! yeah j/j but just try to update as soon as you can, ;)
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Reviewed By: buffaholic On: July 25, 2004 00:33 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*laughs evily* hahhahahahaa guess what? your no hassle days are coming to an end soon. wednesday to be precise, cause it'll be two weeks since you last updated. sooo im giving you till then before i start up again. lol, just a friendly reminder. and im sorry if im bothering you and it seems like i don't have a life but ...i don't! cause is summer holidays! plus i just really love your story! actually i'll tell you what, i'll give you two and a half weeks. lol yah i know im a pain in the ass. well..till then! ;)
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Reviewed By: akuma_river [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2004 20:28 CDT
Comment/Review:
Great chapter. Keep up the great work. Love the story.
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Reviewed By: buffaholic On: July 19, 2004 13:40 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL, YAAAAY! yup, i sure am happy now!= D that was an awesome chapter!!! omg that made my day!i was reeally hoping there was guna be some action between kagome and inuyasha. an don't worry i'll back off for a while, give you a little break from my nagging. but if you start slacking and taking a whooole lot of time...lol you know i'll be back bothering you again! and again, GREAT CHAPTER!
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Reviewed By: Aitu-- not signed in On: July 15, 2004 13:32 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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hehehehehe. I loved it! Is Spike or Angel going to make an appearence? I feel as if you've answered this question before but I just had to ask again. I can see Spike and Inuyasha getting along for some reason, lol. Loved the kitchen scene! hehe, make more like that! Are Kagome and Inuyasha going to admit feelings for one another? I can't wait till you make another chapter, I hope it comes soon! Keep up the great work! *runs around like a crazy person* --Aitu
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Reviewed By: buffaholic On: July 13, 2004 16:09 CDT
Comment/Review:
god, pleeeeease update soon! i can't take much more of this, that's a reeeally bad cliffhanger...i mean it was great but the waiting is horrible!
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Reviewed By: Eleature [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2004 10:22 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh No! You can't leave the story hanging like this! It's plain cruel! I really liked the story and the plot was really creative, I'm looking forwards to your update. Please do it soon! -Eleature
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Reviewed By: buffaholic On: July 09, 2004 17:32 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
checkin to see if you've updated yet, pleeeeeese do!! that was such a greeeeat story, but you cannot leave a cliffhanger like that!!!!UPDATE SOON
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Reviewed By: buffaholic On: July 08, 2004 19:58 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE UPDATE!! I CANNOT STAND THE SUSPENSE!! HONESTLY YOU CAN'T LEAVE IT LIKE THAT, FINISH IT!!! PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEASE GOD!!!!!!IM GUNA DIIIIIIIIIIIE!!! UPDATE NOOOOOOOOW!!!!
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