| "Choosing A Husband" Reviews/Comments [ 74 ] |
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Reviewed By: Lainey On: March 15, 2004 18:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is one sorry excuse for a story -_-; First of all you're confusing the plot. I don't know why all you people have to bring poor Kouga in here and in the end he gets stuck with the over-active Ayame. Maven? My god, what a bitch. What kind of chapter title is "Here comes the bitch carrying a stick"? Personally I enjoyed this story like in the...first chapter? Maven is a sorry excuse for an OC. Sesshoumaru is EXTREMELY OOC. I think the only characters that are the same is..well..Inuyasha. He's ruff, gruff and kick-ass. Please, I know that there is still hope for this story, make it better.
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Reviewed By: the unknowned On: March 15, 2004 10:15 CST
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inuyasha and kagome, not anyone esle, its just weird. i argee with lunar_girl. just weird. plz make it a inuyasha and kagome fan fic, it would be dissapointting (i cant SPELL!!!) if it was a seshoumaru and kagome one, AWKWARD!!!
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Reviewed By: lunar_girl On: March 15, 2004 10:11 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
inu/kag all the way, it would seem too weird if it was sesshou/kag. EWWWWWWW but thats my opinion inu and kag makes a cute couple. besides, sesshou still has rin rite? RITE???? lol o well. inu/kag plz.
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Reviewed By: senko On: March 15, 2004 10:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is such a cool fan fic, i still want it to be a inu/kag though i hate to see him paired up with... oh wats her name? Maven? shes so annoying. poor inu if hes stuck with her. unless kouga gets stuck with her then i wouldnt mind that much if kag was with sesshou, i kinda find it confusing because i dont noe whose talking at some points, like the time when sesshou was saying, "sleep well mutt" whose mutt? inu? kag? or mavin? is mavin a dog too? although its confusing, i still like the story. =D
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Reviewed By: Psycho Demoness [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2004 19:34 CST
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YAY! UPDATE!! Ooh...interesting. Inu-chan is JEAAAALOOOUSSS!!! Lol. Yeah, I'm a loser, I know...Great story and keep it up!
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Reviewed By: AMANDA TRINH. On: March 09, 2004 09:55 CST
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I WANT THIS FIC 2 BE A INU/KAG PAIRING!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Psycho Demoness (not logged in) On: March 08, 2004 22:15 CST
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Yay!! New chappie!! Please update soon!! Really really really REALLY interesting!! Sesshy/Kag FOREVER!! ....please? =D
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Title: SESS KAG IS THE BEST
Reviewed By: Stormy Nights Rainy Days [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2004 12:26 CST
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please you see so many inu kag it is kina gettin hard to find a well written sess kag so please I am all for SESS/KAG
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Reviewed By: Satori Foxfire On: March 04, 2004 17:26 CST
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Cool story! I hope it ends up being a sessh/kag pairing, anyways good luck, and have fun!
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Reviewed By: Dark Kitsune On: March 03, 2004 21:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like your fanfic. Oh and if your still trying to decide on who Kagome should be paired off with, I think it should be Sesshomaru. I mean come on there are like about a billion inuyasha/Kagome pairing's, It gets so annoying. *sigh* We'll Ja ne ^_^
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Reviewed By: Starry Dragon Knights [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2004 10:16 CST
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interesting keep going though! Starry Dragon Knights
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Reviewed By: every1luvsme On: February 29, 2004 22:04 CST
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sorry, the damn computer screwed everything up. sessh/kag. what else?
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Reviewed By: Kitten's Meow On: February 29, 2004 19:37 CST
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Wow I hate Maven...she's a downright bitch. Well, anyhoo make this a sessh/kag please!! Update soon!!!!
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Reviewed By: Sea of Kittens On: February 29, 2004 19:16 CST
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sesshoumaru and kagome please!!
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Reviewed By: crazedpsycho (not signed in) On: February 29, 2004 19:09 CST
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SESSH/KAG HELL YEAH!!
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