| "The Heart's Struggle" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: Kikyouhater On: March 15, 2004 21:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
One reason why is that i loved the part where kikyou died!!! *im sorry if u like her i just hate the b*#$h!* I allso like that kagome is becoming a demon but is it half? I hope that u get the next chapter up real soon cause i cant get enough of your story!!!! im working on one of my own but i havent uploaded or anythings its still in the working process. SOOO PLEASE UPDATE SOOON I CAN BARELY CONTAIN MY SELF!!!!! dont be a stranger!! p.s. if u want to contact me heres my e-mail txgirl91@sbcglobal.net *please no spam or anything rude.*
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Title: Taeniaea
Reviewed By: Taeniaea [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2004 11:33 CST
Comment/Review:
I love it update as soon as possible!!! I MUST see Kagome's reaction!!!!
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Reviewed By: diablos42069 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2004 22:58 CST
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ahhhh! you have to update as soon as possible!!! I MUST see Kagome's reaction! this is a good story! update soon! arianna
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Reviewed By: diablos42069 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2004 22:31 CST
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ok that doesnt make any sence, in the last chapter, they ran into eachother and Inu yasha said "Kagome?" and Kagome went "Inu yasha?" but then in the next chapter he was like "Kikyo is that you?" its a good story though, that just confused me, i'm gonna keep reading now arianna
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Reviewed By: Dreaming_Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2004 12:31 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good chapter. There's one thing you need to work on and it's the spelling. I mean it's not that bad but there're a couple of typos. Update soon. It's the "Corpse VS. Reincarnation Showdown".
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Title: Alright
Reviewed By: Stephie_102 On: January 20, 2004 17:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG I loved LOL considering I read it in math class and I haven't even seen the show yet yes yes i know...i have to see it but thanks to Inu_chan542 I am caught up LOL it was awsome except or that one line LOL...
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Reviewed By: Dreaming_Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2003 18:59 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Why'd Inuyasha die?! *sobs* So Sad. Is it really Inuyasha who she bumped into?! Please tell me it is. Don't turn this into Sess/Kag, Please. Update soon!
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Title: Inuyasha lover
Reviewed By: Inuyasha_For_Ever [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2003 21:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it. The only problem was that if Inuyasha was human, then how could he use his claws and I thought they were in the kitcen not Kagomes room, as put in Souta's view.
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