| "For Your Eyes Only" Reviews/Comments [ 58 ] |
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Reviewed By: puppy4ever On: December 09, 2003 00:52 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome fic. Please, can you write somemore?
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Reviewed By: loulou160 On: December 09, 2003 00:51 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked it. You should make this into a series or at least make a sequel...
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Reviewed By: Kat8125 On: December 09, 2003 00:50 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just got done reading the fic and I must say it was very good!!! I have been waiting quite some time for a tastful lemon, and your story sure was one. I really hope you continue this. :)
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Reviewed By: ArtemisMoon On: December 09, 2003 00:32 EST
Comment/Review:
I normally don't review on this site since I tend to like the ff.net review system better, but as soon as I started reading this story, I just knew I'd end up writing one and shamelessly begging for more chapters! I loved it! I think you've got the start of a great story on your hands and it would be a terrible waste not to continue with it. You've got an obvious talent for description and setting the mood and tone of a story. The only thing I would really pick on is that you could you just a little bit of work in the editing department, but not much at all. Just some technical mistakes that can be easily found and fixed if read over carefully. ^_^ Overall it's a wonderful story though, so please continue to work on it! I will be looking for an update that I hope will come soon. Until then, have fun writing!
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Reviewed By: MagicGurl89 On: December 08, 2003 23:17 EST
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good fic how about letting kagome be the dominant one in the next lemon if your re gonna have another one of course.
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Reviewed By: Nekessla On: December 08, 2003 21:51 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is cool. Please continue. It's like a combo of one of my fave animes and one of my fave movies. Later!
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Reviewed By: Gothic Butterfly [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2003 21:35 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Font ColorI really like this story, so I hope that you continue it and update soon. I have to ask if you got the idea for the cerimony from that short TV series, The Mists of Avalon? It sounded familar to me, but it was better than in the series :P So keep writing and update soon please, I can't wait to read more :)
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Reviewed By: Jeanette On: December 08, 2003 21:28 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Omg, I love this fic!! Please, PLEASE keep writing! I can't wait to read more of this fanfic!! I will be severely depressed if you do not keep going. *goes and cries in corner* I love your fic!
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Reviewed By: hana maru285 On: December 08, 2003 19:21 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey! i liked the story! it was greast i hope you contineu sooon
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Title: i liked it
Reviewed By: luna_night [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2003 18:36 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i know im a pain in the butt and i didnt fill out all the other ratings..it is a good story over all...there are a few problems with words but thats a typo that spell check cant find. i didnt notice any misspellings. i suck at grammar so i cant help you there. but you might wana find a beta reader to check up on the mis typed words. please dont be insulted it is just constructive critism..the story has a lot of potential. very origional which is rare these days...i do hope you continue it..hmmmm if you have any questions u can feel free to ask me..:)
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: Sirista On: December 08, 2003 18:04 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow... can I really say that and have it not sound well... wrong? lol Reading this was amazing... one of the Best lemons I have ever read... but that's not the point, really. You're story (as it sounds like it will continue) has amazing detail and strength. Plain and simple, your writing was way above par- hard to find these days in fanfiction. The story is also very unique with power behind it. Continue writing like that and I have doubt you'll make a nice mark for yourself among fans.
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Title: Continue!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Ashra Ab [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2003 11:51 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Really, I loved this fic, I hope you can keep on writin on it or else write another one soon.
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Title: ch.2
Reviewed By: Maribel On: December 08, 2003 07:41 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i loved the story very much. i hope i get to read more of your stories in the future
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