| "For Your Eyes Only" Reviews/Comments [ 58 ] |
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Reviewed By: kaginu4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2012 00:35 EDT
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I love this story and I have been following it for some time now. I would love to know what happens to Inuyasha and Kagome. Please update as soon as you are able |
Reviewed By: ji-an [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2010 04:58 EDT
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I hate to be pesky, but I just can't wait for the next chapter. I want to know what happens to Kagome and Inuyasha now. How will they handle her pregnancy? And what about their relationship! How far are they going to travel and how will his tribe treat Kagome? Will she lose her spiritual powers now that she's not a virgin anymore? Pwease update as soon as you can. I want to know what happens next!
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Reviewed By: Inumimi [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2010 13:49 EDT
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So far more questions than answers! If Inu is the leader of his "clan" then is there no older brother? If he is only a half demon will his children with Kagome be more human than youkai (which would be fine for the first child who will live with humans, but bad for any others they have)? Hope Inu and Kagome have a bit more interaction soon! I am glad you let us know English is not your 1st language as I did notice quite a number of grammar and odd word use errors in this new chapter (I would be less forgiving to a native speaker - ha ha). Looking forward to your next chapter!
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Reviewed By: ji-an [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2010 17:49 EDT
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Awesome!! That was a fast update! I wonder who took the Shikon no Tama and what Inuyasha's mother did that convinced him to take Kagome as his mate. I feel sort of sorry for the two being forced to be together and I can't wait to see who this plays out.
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Reviewed By: funnyduckie1 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2010 17:24 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is really hot!! Really awesome plot!!
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Reviewed By: secret35 On: April 22, 2010 16:21 EDT
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GAH i love this story its such a nice refreasher compared to some stories, no offence to the people out there. but i love where this story is going, im really excited XD. please update as soon as possible please pretty please love secret
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Reviewed By: Inumimi [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2010 13:30 EDT
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I do not remember if I read your original, but I can say this version is marvelous! I want to know all about this world and what will now happen to Kagome and Inu. Well written and very moving. Looking forward to the continuation of this story.
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Reviewed By: WindWarrior On: April 19, 2010 23:55 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are a very talented author, setting the stage for your story and allowing readers to empathize with Kagome very well. I actually felt like crying with Kagome at the end haha. There is enough room that you can play with your descriptions more if you'd like, though I sincerely hope that you won't start trying to describe things in a way that breaks the mood like many authors on this site do. Please continue to do such lovely work, I look forward to reading your next installment.
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Title: Wonderful!
Reviewed By: ji-an [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2010 05:10 EDT
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Not only has one of my favorite stories started up again, but it's been completely revamped, re-imagined and redone in both a complex and realistic style. I love Kagome's reactions to the whole experience, and though it's a bit sad, it is realistic. You have a great way with imagery, especially when describing the forest, and a talent for making one recognize the emotions of the character. I'm VERY grateful for the change and that the story has returned. It's rare these days that I find a story I like this much! I can't wait to see what comes next!
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Title: when will u update??
Reviewed By: babydragon213 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2007 06:14 EDT
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according to ur most recent work on this story it has been quite a whie. ur details and imagination is so fascinating i must say. And the way you put such details has me begging for more of ur story. please update soon though. pease? Babydragon
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Title: review
Reviewed By: Diren [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2006 15:29 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your story is soooo great!! Please continue writing, it so addicting to read your story
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Title: another story, pls?
Reviewed By: Ashra Ab [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2006 19:20 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
do you know that yours is one of a (very) few short stories i really love??? I hope you write something more, pls, your style is great, i really loved this one, specially the mix. I mean, this fic is short AND is an AU, and I LOVED it!! and honestly, I read a lot, so im very 'picky' i dont read just any story. I have you on my fav authors list, so im hoping you write more, cuz you've got talent. honestly.
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Reviewed By: Tweetylover On: June 11, 2005 03:57 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That cant be the end!Please please update soon^_^!
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Title: love it too
Reviewed By: LaDonna On: March 05, 2005 03:23 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You write nothing but beautiful stories and I will expect from now on nothing but the best from you.
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Title: love it too
Reviewed By: LaDonna On: March 05, 2005 03:23 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You write nothing but beautiful stories and I will expect from now on nothing but the best from you.
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