| "Back Massage" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Title: SwEeT!!!!!!! ^_^
Reviewed By: DarkAngel69 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2004 21:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWSOME CHAPTER!!!!!!! I LOVE IT!!!!!! keep up the good work and i hope to see the next chapter soon!!!!!! ^_^ YOUR DOING A GREAT JOB!!!!!!! good job
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Title: what the f#$k?
Reviewed By: purpleangel On: August 02, 2004 04:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Of course because it's my story screwed up by you. In case you didn't figure it out by now, but RoBob again. You fucked up my story, but it's funny. You had me punching myself in the side of my head because I was trying not to crack up like a dumbass egg. Fairytopia of Wonder What? What the hell were you thinking?
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Reviewed By: commando115 On: June 16, 2004 12:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So far so good, keep it up! it's getting interesting.
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Title: Anna
Reviewed By: DatChicAnna [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2004 00:49 CDT
Comment/Review:
Wow that was funny and great at the same time keep up the great work on your fanfic. ^_^ Ja Ne
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Reviewed By: Jensempai101 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2004 19:02 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
kewl story keep up with it!
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Title: The Story
Reviewed By: Ancient Wu On: February 19, 2004 16:24 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It does have some writing mistakes but it doesn't really matter just update it soon it was just getting good.
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Title: Ok this is very funny!!
Reviewed By: Vellakitty [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2004 06:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey though you were going to put the next version up in Decber? This is really funny, whats the hold-up? You have got to finish this one, its very funny, and cute!!! PLEASE up date this fic, PLEASE!!!!! Love yah if you do!!!! Well bye for now!!!! ^-__-^
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Reviewed By: Inu Girl On: December 30, 2003 20:34 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
aaww come on it was just geting good
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Reviewed By: RedHerring [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2003 21:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok, that was definately not NC-17 material. and why are you breakin it up into several pieces? You should just make it a one shot. Also, I noticed alot of spelling errors and gramatical mistakes. I think that if you caught those, and actually wrote out the entire story, then it would make a really good lemon one shot. One more thing: Kagome seemed really out of character. I mean, shooting arrows at him? Come on. Cute, but not something that Kagome would do. All in all, I think this story needs some editing before it becomes good, so work on it. ^___^
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Reviewed By: loulou4729 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2003 19:06 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is actually a cute story. You do have alot of errors, but once fixed it will be great...
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Reviewed By: rosie13 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2003 11:01 CST
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This is funny! He finally gets what he deserves!! hahahahaha! I dont hate Inuyasha, but he can be really annoying sometimes.... Anyway, quick update!!!! :)
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