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| "Synopsis of Angels and Demons" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Title: Something I couldn't do
Reviewed By: Linny-chan On: January 25, 2004 16:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is definatley something i couldn't do Great job don't stop
| Title: Uhm
Reviewed By: headache On: December 26, 2003 22:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well. I'll Be honest. It's good writing but it isn't the same as a novel. In a novel I just feel more of a connection. It's more like roleplay than a novel. Also. The code you have ** ' " and stuff shouldn't be needed. You should just work it in so that they know when it's a memory, thought, or if the character is speaking. And finally.. Perhaps it's just me but I felt you were too hmn... Descriptive in certain parts if you know what I'm saying? Feels like you just tried much harder on those areas than the others.
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