"Twelve Different Flowers" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] | Reviewed By: Angelwater8 On: June 14, 2004 01:37 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: *^_^* You've done it again - another great story! It was really cute! I love Lantis and Hikaru! It was just as sweet as the other story you wrote! Just one little suggestion though...maybe you could expand on how her flowers disappeared instead of just saying they disappeared. But then again, you don't have to listen to me...^_^ Ok, well, I look forward to more stories, so keep writing them! Til then
| Reviewed By: Moon_Kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2004 21:31 CST Comment/Review:
| Reviewed By: Moon_Kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2004 21:31 CST Comment/Review: Awwww! How cute!!!! Allie-
| Reviewed By: ko-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2004 13:51 CST Comment/Review: it is so sweet i love it
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