| "Sweet like a Umi and Ascot Fanfic" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: princesa_angelbebe [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2008 04:47 CDT
Comment/Review:
I can totally see her bumping into him! oh how sweet and romantic.. love it!
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Reviewed By: Angelwater8 On: June 14, 2004 01:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*^_^* Wow! That was soooo kawaii! I love your story! It was really sweet how Ascot finally made a move on Umi. For a one shot story , you did well blending everything in. Those two really should have gotten together, huh? Well, keep up the great work. I look forward to reading more of your stories! Til then...
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Title: It was so Beautiful!
Reviewed By: RoyalBlueCherryDust [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2004 20:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it! It was soooo beautiful, romantic and sweet!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: GentleKiss On: January 03, 2004 20:50 CST
Comment/Review:
EEEEEEEEEE! Your fic is so kawaii! I love the connection between Umi and Ascot! (now if a guy did that to me i'll be in babe heaven) ahem I love your fics
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Title: CUTE
Reviewed By: Elven Spirit [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2003 17:23 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*Eyes sparkle* That HAS to be the cutest thing I have ever read! I love the Umi/Ascot thing, they have the most chemistry! Thanks for writing that, I loved it!
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Reviewed By: pattie On: December 14, 2003 23:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I wuv your story full of WAFF and cuteness just what I neaded.I love Ascot and Umi fics.
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