| "His Hands" Reviews/Comments [ 31 ] |
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Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2013 00:27 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Can't remember if those last four words of his were in the original or if they're new with your revisal, but either way, I really loved that ending. I really loved this entire one-shot, actually, and I know I read it before, back in the day, but apparently never reviewed. Shame on me! So glad you updated it. So glad you're still in the game! |
Reviewed By: soraryu On: August 24, 2008 20:13 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another awesome one-shot! So cute, so romantic. I love the way you have with description. And I'm sad because just this morning I totally had the idea to write a fic about Kagome and Inuyasha's hands...but you've written it so beautifully here. One typo, here and for Gone Swimmin'. You spell "corded" with an 'h' both times, but Inuyasha's no musical composition. =) Just a feast for the eyes. Thanks for another great read!
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Reviewed By: Silver Dog of the Snow [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2007 21:09 EST
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That was so romantic! I loved it! The tenderness is so obvious and the feelings were so passionate. This is one of the best one-shots I've ever read! *starry eyes* I really loved this piece of literature because it truely is very artistic and very detailed and overall, this was wonderfully done. *hands the author a bouquet of roses* The part of Kagome's description of his hands was so detailed and thougthful that it seriously made the whole piece special and absolutely delightful!
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Reviewed By: aisho [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2007 07:54 EDT
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All the times I`ve read your amazing story(s) and I`ve never writen a review. I think it`s because I just don`t have the same way with words as you do. I will never be able to express how much I love this story. (appreciative, contented sigh) It`s wonderful. It, agh! I just can`t explain but it just makes you feel happy and completed, something wonderful finally worked out the way we always hoped it would. I love your stories. Thank you for taking the time to write them; then furthermore, for posting them for others to read and enjoy. They`re truly wonderful. Thank you.
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Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2007 21:28 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is an absolutely beautiful piece. Thanks. Snow
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Reviewed By: kagome313 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2006 11:15 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That wuz beautiful and so romantic. You really got talent. I love your stories so much( the ones i've read ) Your one amazing writing. now only if that would happen in the anime....love it!!!
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Reviewed By: Kitsune_Magic_1 (NSI) On: July 12, 2006 23:29 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow WOW! Tens all the way!!! I never expected something like this from anybody! I love it! I absolutely love it! I don't know what else to say other than this: I'm definitely coming back to read this again. This little on-shot is now and forever one of my favorites! Man, I wish I could write like you! Once again, I love it! Write more okay? It's great!
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Reviewed By: Susan aka Jozu Oruha On: March 17, 2006 19:31 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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GGGGooooddd that was sooo good!! So romantic. Keep on writing!
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Reviewed By: yanna_enoah [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2006 13:19 EST
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waahh!! now you made me cry... this story should come with a warning: "Not Suitable for Overly Emotional Females Looking for The Men of Their Dreams While They're Still Awake..." *sigh* you're good...one night, four stories and i'm a fan...
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Reviewed By: chungie [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2005 15:41 EST
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Wow, wonderful One-shot. It had just enough fluff and sweetness and beauty. ^.^ The setting was awesome and I was really glad that Inuyasha said "I'll wait... for you." instead of I love you cuz even though I love you has a deeper meaning, in the context it felt like waiting... meant so much more. I appreciate you writing this one!
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Reviewed By: Samishii Hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2005 12:44 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I thought this was an awesome fic really well written and adorable.
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Reviewed By: SlutGarden On: March 31, 2005 19:26 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is an awesome story! I was so sweet it made me want to cry, in a good way of course. I know its cliched, but keep up the good work, your writing is amazing.
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Reviewed By: Zirra Nova [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2005 05:31 EST
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awsome story, just the right amount of sweet and sorrow, with a little fluff thrown in to liven it up, im tempted to say perfect, i will say its as close to perfect as i've ever read, im glad you wrote it. Zirra
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Title: ahhh that was so damn sweet
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2005 18:12 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was so damn sweet I could cry, if I wasn't in a school libarey I would cry...I hope you write with these characters again soon GGAaAAAAA!!!I'm no spamer
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Reviewed By: omgthatwassweet On: January 10, 2005 16:25 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
aw that was so sweet...i just love how you tied everything together, making small connections. I love hands, especially when they 'dwarf' my own, and luckily for me, i have very small hands, so most do ^-^. Keep writing! luvs, Jenn.
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