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| "I Never Dreamed" Reviews/Comments [ 14 ] | Reviewed By: Dani On: November 11, 2016 08:41 PST
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I just wanted to review and tell you that I love your stories,
better late than never. I just read the authors note at the bottom
of chapter one and realized that I don't review enough. I started
reading fanfiction about 12 years ago when I found a Trunks/Pan fic
that my sister's friend had written on her computer. Since then I
have always loved the T/P pairing. I used to read your stories then
and I recently had the urge to find some of my favorites from back
in the day. I found The Price of Power and immediately recognized
your name as one of my favorites. I've never read I Never Dreamed
or I Never Give Up so I decided to go through them before
re-reading Price of Power. I know this isn't necessarily the
constructive comments/critisism that you were talking about but I
still felt the need to tell you that you write stories that are
remembered for years with fondess. I very much enjoy your writing
style and cannot remember any negatives at this time. If I do
notice something I will try to review and let you know, even though
it has been a while since you wrote the stories and I have no doubt
that have only improved since then. I thoroughly look forward to
the next few days of reading because of you. It's been far too long
since I've had that feeling and I thank you for it. :)
| Title: One of my Favorites
Reviewed By: RadiantNirvana [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2008 08:12 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This has to be one of my absolute favorite fanfics of all time. AMCM74's writing is amazing and the storyline is unique from what I've read in the past. The way she portrays the characters is fantastic and they're very relatable. This work has many funny moments as well as a few heartwrenching moments. The only thing that irks me in the slightest is the spelling mistakes. They're fairly few and far between, but they exist. However, they're not so terrible that they detract from the story. I first read this story years ago, and with help from the author recently, I refound it again. It's a very enjoyable piece of fanfiction and I urge those of you who read this review to read it. Two thumbs up AMCM74. I adore your stories and you're a fantastic writer.
| Reviewed By: Sarah aka Vega [MediaMiner Member] On: February 29, 2008 12:00 PST
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I so very much enjoyed this fic! It wasn't perfect, for it had numerous grammar and spelling mistakes and I don't know if I liked what you did with having them be in real Earth (mentioning Japan and USA) also, the fact Dende shows up was just weird, but in a whole, it was just so awesome! Great read, it flowed so well and it had me interested in what woudl happen till the end. Great job!
| Title: been read your fic since 11-2:42 am.
Reviewed By: Nik-Nik or wolf_girl87 On: August 04, 2005 03:00 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I do enjoy reading you fic. I do have a dbz fic, up myself. But, it's on FF.Net under the sn wolf-girl87 or it has an underscore instead of a dash. I don't remember really. Anywho, I thought I would post a review on this chapter, considering my muscles are tense from leaning and what not. At least this fic, is not like others I've read before. It's original, which is really good among fellow writers, like myself. I'm also a writer on AFF.net, my sn for that is Nik-Nik. I do hope you continue on with your writing. Which reminds me, I have to update about 6 stories and write a sequeal to What is l0ve? also it's a Pokemon fic. Anywho, I will continue to read this fic later on in the day. For I am tired at this moment. Not to mention, I have to prepare of taking in the ramblings of younger sister, most likely she will be upset with something. If you care to e-mail me, feel free to. wolf_girl87@hotmail.com My goal for the posting of the comments and reviews, was to use up all the characters, sadly I will not be able to. Though, I could, you never know. Now I'm just rambling. But, yes, indeed your work is good. I do hope that you can find the time to read my fic's on FF.net, that is if you have the time and all. I will not pressure you into doing it, but I would appreciate it a great deal. Also, if you have any ideas on what I should do for my Witch Hunter Robin fic, I will be happy to recieve your help. ^__^ Actually, I have changed my mind, I seemed to reach my goal.
| Reviewed By: venus legacy On: April 06, 2004 10:46 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I did not want this story to end at all you are very good at allowing for unexpected twists to sneak up on the reader which i thoroughly enjoy. The main one being the arrival of future aiko that was brilliant you definately need to do a sequal to this the personality of 17 year old aiko and even baby aiko captivated me so much that i just have to see a sequal. The relationship between aiko and vegeta was fantastic and the ending was fitting. You wrapped things up very well whilst leaving the reader thirsting for more. Also i would love to see a picture of mark devero and aiko. I think your pictures are beautiful especially bulma and vegeta as an angel embracing her.
| Reviewed By: venus legacy On: April 06, 2004 06:33 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey i'm liking this story more as i read on i was beginning to think that it was yet again another cliche trunks and pan fic where pan comes back from college and gets with trunks. But you continue to surprise me with pan being pregnant as well as the intoduction of mark devero who i am increasingly beginning to like. The chemistry between him an Bra is classic i can't wait to see what happens. And whats with vegetas interest in Mark devero this is too intriging i have to read more.
| Reviewed By: Cooey On: February 28, 2004 17:57 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great fic and the characters were so real. And fun. Thanks so much. Looking forward to the Bra/Devero fic!
| Reviewed By: diablos42069 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2004 01:25 PST
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holy shit dude!!!! thats sooooooo fucked!!!!! he has to choose?! omg, i couldnt do it! i would prolly sit there thinkin about it so long that they would have both died, and been dead for like 20 years! ugh! how does a doctor just come in and say "choose you wife or your kid" grrrrr. btw i love that line "SCREW YOU DENDE I CAN HEAR YOU LAUGHING!" ahahahahahaha anyways update soon! arianna
| Reviewed By: diablos42069 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2004 09:31 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow, i said update soon, and you updated like the next day! lol!! anyways maybe if i say it again you'll update tomorrow so...... update soon!!!! arianna
| Reviewed By: diablos42069 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2004 08:05 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have to tell you something.... I LOVE YOU!!!!!! I swear! this story is so damn good!!! at first i wasn't going to read it, but i am so happy i did!!!! keep updating and i will keep loving you!!!! lol, not that you care. anyways, ya, once again, please update as soon as possible. I love the way you made devero, cause at first i hated him and then i fuckin loved him to!!! he was so funny.... this story was hillarious!!!!!! you got the personalities just perfect! I sat here and read all 25 chapters!!! i only got up to have a ciggerette and go to the bathroom! from like 2am to 8am!!!!! so... ya.... just update!!.... hurry up!!!! i dont see any other chapters.... ariana
| Title: Miss
Reviewed By: Kachie-chan On: January 10, 2004 19:53 PST
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This keeps getting better and better!! I love it!! You definately keep the reader coming back for more!
| Title: Miss
Reviewed By: Kachie-chan On: December 25, 2003 07:35 PST
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Trunks has to win ... (giggle)
| Title: I'm back for thirds. ^_^
Reviewed By: Loaf of Pan [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2003 22:05 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, you've been reposting your work all over the place, my dear! I just wanted to tell you that I still enjoy reading your fics, even though for most of them it would be the 3rd or 4th time. The one comment I have for you is your spelling and grammar. You mix up tenses a lot, and your sentence structure is a bit confusing. It would help to have someone go over them before you post. I don't know if you already do, considering you've been writing for some time now. If you don't, I would be more than willing to look over your writing myself for errors before you post. I only want you to keep improving as a writer, because you are so good, and I'm sure you're not taking it offensively. Anyway, I can't wait to read this again! I just love Devero. HATED him in the beginning. But I heart him, I do. Lol, take care! ~ Loaf of Pan = loafofpan@aol.com
| Title: Miss
Reviewed By: Kachie-chan On: December 11, 2003 14:40 PST
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Ok now I have to know what Trunks is going to do to get Pan back!! Update soon, please!!
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