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| "The Room Where The Light Won't Find You" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: Miko no Tears and Aya [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2004 01:04 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wel ggrr! u left it hanging! Ack, must have more of this fic! Please? *bats giant chibi eyes at author* i like it, it makes a person thinka bit adn the emotion is just rolling off the characters,it's fabulous!
| Title: X) yay!
Reviewed By: Vampire Louis [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2003 04:49 CST
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Ooooh please continue, I'm all curious now! It's interesting the way you went from third person to first person then back to third person at the end. And it was equally interesting the way you kept switching point of views. It took me a moment to realize who's head I was in but I caught on and it made me happy. Anyway, who is the "him" that Aya refers to? I want to know!!! X) Please hurry and write the next chapter. -VL
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