| "Feelings (Formally known as Inuyasha)" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: Shoi On: February 13, 2005 18:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 3 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your story is very interesting. It is really different. The thing that threw me off alot was the way you made Sesshoumaru act. It didn't feel right and that made the story a little boring. And also you didn't go so much into details. But you have creativty to make it your own way. So good job. Keep writing =)
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Reviewed By: MidNight-Kitsune On: December 22, 2003 19:41 CST
Comment/Review:
Ok when and why did inuyasha rape kag.but it's a pretty good story ^__^
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Reviewed By: White Tiger Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2003 19:37 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i was wondering when are you going to...UPDATE!! you have to update soon!!
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Reviewed By: Cresent Moon 22000 On: December 14, 2003 16:15 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
HEHEHEHEH ME LIKE ME LIKE PLz UPDATE SOON OK
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Title: Feelings (Formally known as Inuyasha)
Reviewed By: Chibi Methos On: December 14, 2003 00:25 CST
Comment/Review:
Well, other that it being EXTREAMLY hard to read the way you have it formated, the story is interesting.
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Reviewed By: Demon Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2003 17:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh awsome!!!!! I think the title should be Feelings cool???
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Reviewed By: Sundragon (not signed on) On: December 11, 2003 17:08 CST
Comment/Review:
The story is great! Characters are a little OOC, but it is your fic. I also want to see where you are going with it. Keep writing! Adios!
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2003 22:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well in all honest opioin, the characters' personalities are a little off and it would be better if you didn't write in block form. And sense the story is about rape it can't be rated as 'PG' with the consept of rape it has to be at least 'R'. But it is a good idea for a fanfic.
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