| "The way things are" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: animehfreak099 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2006 02:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
you know your fanfics are good! no matter how bad it looks, it's really good! keep up the good work and we have something in common... WE HATE SASUKE!
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Title: astounding piece
Reviewed By: azure101 On: March 11, 2005 19:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a very cute and interesting fanfic :) Very original and well done! You used all the the Sasuke and Sakura moments that are in the book (or anime/manga!) and renewed them your way! That is very creative ;P Although you could improve your style of writing. Make it flow like water, but what you have now is just a smooth highway road with pot-holes in them and those pot-holes are stepping stones to improvement. Smoothing out the wording and all should make the story sound a lot better. I also loved the fact you used Sasuke's point of view. You greatly used it and as an author, I think you've done a great job. Way to go!!! Overall, it wasn't that bad and on my opinion this is the ONLY Sasuke and Sakura fanfic that is decent enough for the sake of those two that I have ever read even though it is only one-shot. Keep up the good work and in the future, please produce more of your creative and very original masterpiece.
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Title: astounding piece
Reviewed By: azure101 On: March 11, 2005 19:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a very cute and interesting fanfic :) Very original and well done! You used all the the Sasuke and Sakura moments that are in the book (or anime/manga!) and renewed them your way! That is very creative ;P Although you could improve your style of writing. Make it flow like water, but what you have now is just a smooth highway road with pot-holes in them and those pot-holes are stepping stones to improvement. Smoothing out the wording and all should make the story sound a lot better. I also loved the fact you used Sasuke's point of view. You greatly used it and as an author, I think you've done a great job. Way to go!!! Overall, it wasn't that bad and on my opinion this is the ONLY Sasuke and Sakura fanfic that is decent enough for the sake of those two that I have ever read even though it is only one-shot. Keep up the good work and in the future, please produce more of your creative and very original masterpiece.
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Title: Awww!
Reviewed By: minna On: June 18, 2004 03:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWWW I JUST LOVE YOUR FANFICS...But I can't find a reason why you don't like Sasuke-kun...BUT OH WELLS! HOHOHOHO! ANYWAYS...PLEASE WRITE SOME MORE! I LOVE YOUR WORKS!
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Reviewed By: litto nancy On: April 28, 2004 19:40 CDT
Comment/Review:
OOO, this is such a nice one-shot!!!
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Reviewed By: mental [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2004 23:42 CDT
Comment/Review:
That's not bad at all I could never do that you are a realy good author and well uhm what was I gonna say damn my friend he had to him he with a frying pan 3 minutes ago that bastard!Oh yeah now I remember you know exactly what gose on in a persons heart unlike me I just torture people even my best friend.Ok now I know I'm retarded oh well I gotta go and kill my doctor that fat bastard runs fast oh well gotta go bye bye.(^_^)
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Reviewed By: Crest Starlight [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2004 22:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was beautiful. Very nicely written and expressed even better. I haven't seen that far into Naruto yet but thats ok now I have alot of cute little scenes to look forward to.
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Reviewed By: Kyria the fallen angel [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2003 16:22 CST
Comment/Review:
Ohh...It's not bad at all!It's beautiful.... Akari:It really is...please write another fanfiction...an author as good as yourself should write lots of fanfiction.
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