| "Invisible Emotions" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: dudekiller [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2007 14:40 CDT
Comment/Review:
You might want to add more deatails and descriptions in further chaps. This is a cool story so far. Good job. Please update soon.
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Title: good job
Reviewed By: jetset6 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2006 06:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
as your superior i comand you to make more......please.
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Reviewed By: fLcL_FFx_lovr [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2006 22:58 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
write more
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Reviewed By: aquila333 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2006 03:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Gaaaaaahhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!! plz plz plz write the next chapter! im going out of my mind waiting!!....0_o......Oh, this is a really good story and i would like it a lot if u updated more!^_^
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Reviewed By: DreamAnimeKitten [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2005 16:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed this story. It's very good. Looking forward to the next chapter.
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Title: Just a few questions
Reviewed By: unimportant On: December 05, 2004 21:13 CST
Comment/Review:
I'm not flaming you or anything, but, why in the hell is it that when most people make an original character, they feel the need to make them exotic-looking? Why? What's with the streaks and unexplainably odd colored eyes. Everyone knows that in the world of Naruto, the only shinobi with oddly colored eyes are those with blood limit abilities or some kind of clan trait. Also, who in the Naruto series has a name like Sathena? If you hadn't noticed, most of the names of the characters are puns, and all of them have been well thought out. What the hell does 'Sathena' mean? Were you just too lazy to come up with a name that has meaning? It isn't very hard to come up with a good name if one is really trying. Where did this character originate? Who was her family? Who the hell trained her? Finally, try to avoid the dreaded Mary Sue. Those things are terribly annoying.
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Title: review for your wonderful, excitement-filled story!
Reviewed By: hiei_luver168 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2004 01:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is really good. i'm really enjoying it. please update really soon. did i give you enough reallys? good. i really really really like it! i added some more just in case!^_^
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