| "Give a Reason (Full Moon wo Sagashite Style)" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: Fluence [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2004 20:17 CST
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I guess I was just impatient... sorry :( If there's a way to edit/delete reviews, I'll come back and do that. Sorry again!
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Reviewed By: Fluence [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2004 03:11 CST
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Why did Usagi commit suicide in the first place? I suppose we'll find out in later chapters... You painted a beautiful description, the dress and subsequent transformation was very vivid. There are some parts where it felt like you were explaining things almost as an author diety. The part where Usagi realizes that she shouldn't be remembering her past so quickly was the first time I noticed this. I hope to read more chapters in the future, but it's been a while so I hope you (plural?) haven't given up on the story... Sorry if this is a duplicate review, I wrote one and Submitted it and it seems to have disappeared.
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Reviewed By: Fluence [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2004 03:04 CST
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Why did Usagi suicide anyway? I suppose we'll find out in later chapters, huh... I really like your description of Usagi's dress and subsequent transformation, it was very vivid. You show us what you're thinking a bit too often in the story, sort of like a godly perspective where it felt I shouldn't have one. Where you tell us that she shouldn't be remembering her past was the first time I felt that. I hope to see your (plural) continuation eventually... it's been a while, hopefully you haven't given up on the story.
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