| "The Dark Hour" Reviews/Comments [ 133 ] |
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Reviewed By: cutie_pie_2101_1012(2 lazy 2 sign in)] On: April 30, 2004 15:39 CDT
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Font Color hey wat are they doing to sesshomaru ^-^ pleaz update soon
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2004 22:27 CDT
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He is really doing some serious mental damage to Inuyasha!!!!!!! Poor guy! But he really is a lap dog. And what is he doing to Sesshoumaru??? Does it have something to do with his dog form??? And how did Inuyasha find them!!! You got to update soon!!!! Soooo many questions!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Teru04 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2004 17:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love the fic and I can't wait till the next chappie! Thanks.
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Reviewed By: Antoinette On: April 22, 2004 09:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've only read the first 3 chapters so far, but I'm hooked! You really have a knack for building suspense and I LOVE that you make your reader figure things out! Good work so far!
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness(not signed on) On: April 21, 2004 06:29 CDT
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A very rough, passionate lemon and it was done very well!! You should be proud!!! But is he going to tell her what's wrong now??? Update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Orb [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2004 16:11 CDT
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Aww they're mates!!!! *gets starry eyed* Aww even tho Sess-chan was all rough and stuff (not that Im complaining lol) it was still sweet lol. It made me really want lasagna tho lol. I hope you cant update soon. The "morning after" chapter can only be super gr8!
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Reviewed By: Aitu [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2004 00:49 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh guess what.. loved this chapter too! I'm pretty sure that not matter you wrote it would be perfectly fine. I'm so impressed right now that if the next chapter only contained the word "the" I would still think it was fabulous due to the fan-fucking-tastic chapters that preceded it. hahaha, okay, so maybe I'm taking things just a little bit too far but I hope that the idea got across. This latest chapter, so much emotion that was portrayed flawlessly! Especially the end. I have to agree with Kym, that was hot! haha. Thank god for someone who doesn't use the standard " be gentle, first time", blah blah blah bullshit. Well, now that my opinion is voiced I will remian seated at my lap top while waiting for the next chapter(s) to be added. muahhahaha...... okay, I lied, I might get up once or twice ;)
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Reviewed By: Kym On: April 19, 2004 22:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hot chapter, I always had a thing for fucking on the wall.^_~
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Reviewed By: Aitu [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2004 00:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Perfect 10's all around my story writing friend. As I finished up on the last completed chapter I feel as if I will be going through withdrawl until I can read some more >.< Anyyywaaaay, I reallly really really realllllly enjoy your fic, it's definitly one of the best that I have read. Absofuckinglutly fabulous! Keep up the good work.
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Title: loved it
Reviewed By: amyfushigiyugii On: April 18, 2004 15:14 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yep yep i love your story ^_^ im gonna send the link to my aol group so they can read it to. cant wait for a update grade A++++ fic
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness(not signed on) On: April 15, 2004 22:35 CDT
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WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I thought it was Sango too, before I even read this chapter!!!! And then it turns out to be Kagura!!!!! That is soo bad!!!!!!! Naraku must pay!!!!!!! Update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: review by Orb
Reviewed By: Orb [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2004 16:30 CDT
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oh wow oh wow oh wow!!! This was insane!! Ohmigod this was such a good chapter. I was so scared when KAgome thought Sango was dead. But not that it's Kagura? OH no:(. I hope you update soon!! This story is so good its unreal!!
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2004 00:18 CDT
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This is getting really dramatic!!!!! Wow, it's watching one of those police shows!!!! Update soon!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Orb (as usual, not online) On: April 13, 2004 18:53 CDT
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ooo oooo i dont think i'm confuzzled!!! lol I might be, but I think i have a little clue whats going on. PLease please please update soon, I cant get enough of this story.
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Reviewed By: Orb [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2004 16:06 CDT
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oh wow girl that was a really good lemon. swear it's your first time? lol The chapter was really good too. I mean youd tink "oh its just a lemon" but the end was really sad and really helped for some character develpoment. I hope you can update soon.
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