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Reviewed By: Angelheart21 On: May 09, 2007 23:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a great story. It kept me interested the and wanting more. I enjoyed reading this story very much.
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Reviewed By: Rose of Sharon [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2007 15:53 CST
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Chapter 28: Wow... I mean, just, wow. Your story showed so much depth, in the characters of Sesshomarou and Kagome. One of the things that I think was never explained, though, is why Kagura refused to answer Kagome's question about whether she and Sesshomarou were an item. Is it simply because she was jealous, or protecting Sesshomarou? Or was there something more? I don't need to know, though, becuase I hardly noticed the lack of an answer in the midst of all the brilliancy of the rest of your story. I love the way Onigumo explains everything to Kagome, and how she comes up with the plan to see Sesshomarou. I really admire her for doing that. I also like the fact that you don't have long, complex author's notes at the beginning or the end of your chapters, or little notes during the chapters. It has always disturbed me when authors ruin the best of moments with side comments... Anyways, I just wanted to congratulate you on a job very well done!
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Reviewed By: OrlandoLover [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2007 09:17 CST
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loves it...SAVE THE EARTH IT'S THE ONLY PLANET WITH CHOCOLATE...Cheers
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Reviewed By: matchoupichounette On: September 28, 2006 00:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i just llooooovvvveee it :)
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Reviewed By: Sar17 On: March 11, 2006 21:13 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you made me cry!! no one makes me cry, you story was that good. write more, like a sequel or something, please.
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Title: The Dark Hour
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2006 19:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? Or can you write a sequel to this story please?
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Title: The Dark Hour
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2005 15:08 CST
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I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: dbzgrrrl82 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2004 19:49 CDT
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Reviewed By: AngelHeart On: August 27, 2004 18:47 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That story was so sweet. I loved it!
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Reviewed By: CoOlChIcK [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2004 04:05 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AAAAWWWWW That was such a good ending. They are cuet together. Except i would have been mad if she ddnt find him. But that's so sweet. I loved it. ^_^
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Reviewed By: dReAm EyEz [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2004 22:47 CDT
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will we be seeing a possible sequel anytime soon? *gives puppy dog eyes* pleeeeaaase!!!
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Title: Excellent Story!
Reviewed By: k_immortal On: August 04, 2004 21:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I found this story to be very well paced and exciting all the way. Most stories drag on for much too long, but this one captured my interest from beginning to end. Love it! ^_^
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Title: Question:
Reviewed By: k_immortal On: August 04, 2004 14:59 CDT
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She couldn't call an ambulance because her cell was out of order.... So how was she able to call Sango from her car?
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Reviewed By: FoXy_hOtTiE [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2004 19:12 CDT
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what a wonderful story.intense at times.and that made it even better!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: The one known as me On: June 25, 2004 09:22 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
o.o Its done? ...*sob* ITS DONE!! Ohmigosh! I love this ficcy. I couldnt take my eyes off the screen! You captured the character of everyone really well, and.... IT WAS AWESOME!! *goes to read more of your wonderful works*
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