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Title: Hey!
Reviewed By: AnimeRainChildOfLove [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2006 18:30 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey I just started on your story,it rocks.
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Title: The End
Reviewed By: Ataure [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2004 17:06 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Oh my God that was so beautiful. That was the most...real ceremony of "marriage" I've ever read for this anime. And I loved how you tied in the story of Boton and Argaus in the beginning and end. I simply don't know what else to say, that was just incredibly, awe-inspiringly good.
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Reviewed By: rayven2004 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2004 13:45 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This by far the best kuramaxhiei story i have ever had the pleasure of reading. It was a beautiful story. I loved it!
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Reviewed By: Nsbvegeta notlogged in damn it On: August 29, 2004 18:39 CDT
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You reaaly outdid yourself ...genius work I loved then ending thanks for making Argus guy miserable , he really deseved it like many others do. Well keep up the great work , I expect to see more fics from ya friend I truly adore the way you write its a gift that you have treasure always my bows go to you my dear yoda. Later :)
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Reviewed By: KitsuneLover (not signed in, of course: too lazy) On: August 24, 2004 14:49 CDT
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AHHHH!!! You finished it!! *pretends to wipe tear from eye* I'm so proud! Hehehehe, anyways, this is great! I think i like the sequel more than the original and that's rare! (especially for movies. Have you ever noticed that? Movie sequels always suck...well, almost always) Anhoo! Liked it Loved it can't wait for you to write a third *waiting for rogue pan to come flying in and hit me (of course, by rogue I mean that Kylyx threw it ~.^)* Well, I loved it!
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Reviewed By: mz.bitz. On: August 24, 2004 11:22 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I CANT BELIEVE ITS DONE. that was one of THE BEST fics i have ever read. WOW. i am stunned. it was wonderful all the way, and the long waits for updates were worth it. looking forward to reading mroe of your work. =]
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Reviewed By: Flamingolo1 On: August 22, 2004 09:37 CDT
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Hurray! Yet another excellent chapter! That was so freaking fantastic. You did a magnificent job writing their time apart, as well as the final reunion *does flying cartwheels*. Are you sure those muses of yours aren't having an affair? You must be their love child, because this was the perfect combo of angst and fluff *glomps you*! As for poor Argaus; what a fitting end for him! I'm glad you didn't completely kill him off, he really needs to get a taste of his own medicine, doesn't he *appologetically pets Argaus*? And he was too much of an intruiging character to see him die! I'm gonna miss the twisted fu*&er! So, I've decided that you'll NEED to vent some smut while working on your book...you should really do a third in this series *nudges you*. Anyway, that was a freaking fantastic ficcie! Well done *rolls the keg over to you*, queen of all that is wondrously angsty AND fluffy. ps. To my own deep-seeded disappointment, I couldn't locate the movie reference *hangs head*. I give up, dammit!
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Reviewed By: Tatoosh [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2004 00:00 CDT
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=^-^= Oh you. Thank you for the dedication. Now I have to blush. Okay you delivered, happy tears. So you will get a smutty bath scene, or two. I enjoyed the chapter. Very nice of you not to drag out Kurama torturing both himself and Hiei for longer than you did. I could think of no fitter Hell for Argaus than to be kept by the woman who's heart he broke so callously. I like that as much as I like Kurama rending him to pieces.
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Title: Chapter 7!
Reviewed By: Saiyajin_Raven69 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2004 20:21 CDT
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Excellent chapter! I'm so glad Kurama finally saw Argaus for what he is! Yaaay!!
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Reviewed By: Flamingolo On: July 13, 2004 12:18 CDT
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Oh.My.Freaking.God. You post that next chapter now, dammit! This is an amazing, amazing ficcie. I read the whole thing in ONE sitting, you magnificent writer, you! It's pretty rare that I find myself up until 4 in the morning because I have to find out what's going to happen next in a fanfic! And you did this to me, you evil, evil monkey! So, imagine my complete and total torment since I couldn't actually finish the story, since it is UNFINISHED!! Well, screw you for making this impatient baka wait! *reigns in temper, extinguishing tantrum* *looks around guiltily* Um, forgive my outburst? *coughs apologetically* *tentatively huggles* But, this really is torture in the simplest form. I absolutely love where you headed in the last chappie, love that you work in the intricacies of the situation. Anyway, love, love, love the clever writing style you have; it's extremely vivid and (might I add)deliciously *torturous* at the same time. You've done a really nice job with your OC, so damn complex and yummy. Aside from that whole, imprison-your-soul-and-torture-screams-from-you bit ^_^ Okay, enough ranting on my part. You're fabulous! Love this fic to pieces! Flamingolo Ps. Before I forget, I want a free drink! ROUSs, from The Princess Bride, ne? Yay! Free drink, free drink! Also, Boondock Saints...great movie! Those men are so freaking hot *mops up drool*.
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Reviewed By: sm On: June 12, 2004 04:01 CDT
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Excellent story. Looking forward to next chapter.
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Reviewed By: yoyo7957 On: May 26, 2004 21:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it, keep writing this is a great story!
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Reviewed By: Ataure [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2004 18:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my gosh! I'm just sitting at my computer, completely speechless. That chapter was beautiful. The grammar was a little lacking, but I can hardly complain about that when it was so breathtaking overall. I have to say that this is the best chapter of this story so far.
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Reviewed By: Sasuke89 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2004 16:26 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WONDERFUL!!!! Please keep going with this fic! This bloody brilliant! Love and Peace! Sasuke:)
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Reviewed By: Katy123 On: May 17, 2004 05:04 CDT
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THat was awesome!! I thought that chapter was well worth the wait. Please update soon though!
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Reviewed By: Tatoosh [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2004 21:55 CDT
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Ah so touching and so satisfying. Yay Argaus died and died with pain. It is so much more satisfying to rip such evil apart by hand. Thank you for waking Kurama up to see that Argaus truly had nothing to offer. Poor Kurama, so hard to forgive oneself for being foolish and allowing one's pain to run. Loved the way 'Laria' taunted the monster and then I was worried when she was hurt, but I shouldn't have been, Kurama is too good to allow that to happen. Enjoyed it being Hiei fighting Jargess all along, should have known he wouldn't let Laria really put herself at risk. Soooo, how long will Kurama torture himself and make both him and Hiei sad? I expect a certain amount of angst in the next chapter I just hope it wont end like DreamWeaver did with the first ending, I want happy tears this time please.
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Reviewed By: Ataure [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2004 01:36 CDT
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I'd hardly say that was piddly. Beautifully described...the image of the boiling skin makes me wince every time I think of it.
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Reviewed By: Ataure [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2004 01:18 CDT
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The first part of the first chapter was adorable, the rest vividly grotesque. The boat is unbelievably creative as a form of passage between the worlds. I say this because I have not read of such a thing before, not counting the train in Spirited Away. You have a real talent for writing and, though very morbid, I am captivated by your story.
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Reviewed By: NikkiM On: May 07, 2004 09:31 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! I just found this story, and I love everything about it! Your writting is supurb and I totally love how your twisted little mind works! I wonder where you get the idea's from? I really liked that mix of emotions from Kurama's captor, and still wonder if there was any truth in his feelings or is it all lies? Anyway, no matter, it was wrote splendidly, playing on the emotions of our little fox like that. So did Hiei go thru nothing at all? Wow, I woundn't have guessed any of this. I am doing my part in giving you your cocaine (this review) now I want payment (more story!) You know what happens to junkies who don't pay right? Crunch. I am glad you will be writting a book, blah, blah, blah, but now that I've found you, your leaving me. *sigh* how sad. How dare you! *bitch* *blushing, bowing* Sorry! I don't know where THAT came from. More please!
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Reviewed By: mz.bitz. On: May 05, 2004 21:24 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMGOSH! thank the lord. i was so scared you were going to abandon this fic. good thing i put it on my favorites and checked nearly everyday for updates. ^^;; anyway. post soon! and you should put this on other sites, its a great fic. liek adultfanfiction.net or something.
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Reviewed By: dragonfoxloversforever [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2004 18:33 CDT
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Have you given up on this fic? I hope not! its good!! If so..*on knees hands folded to her chin* Please oh please write more!!
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Reviewed By: Katy123 On: March 27, 2004 20:43 CST
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Please update soon!! Its so good!! But.. WHat were the ribbons for?
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Reviewed By: mz.bitz. On: March 14, 2004 14:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow. i love this. usually i hate many OC things, but this, this fic was wonderfully written, highly original, and jsut amazing. you're stle or writing is like a masterpiece. wow. i almost didnt find this fic becus i mostly read fic on adultfanfiction.net this would fit wonderfully there. please update soon!
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Reviewed By: -KitsuneLover On: March 13, 2004 02:19 CST
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First, I absolutely love this fic. It's wonderfully done and it was fucking awesome. Second, If you ever do read this, will you tell me the title of the book you and your brother are writing? I'd love to read it. Just email me at KitsuneLover12@AOL.com please. Third, you got ROUS from the Fire Swamp rodents in The Princess Bride. That was a cool movie. Anyways, great story and i'm absolutely bummed to here that you wont be writing anymore fanfiction! IT JUST PLAIN SUCKS!!!! Great story!
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Reviewed By: Katy123 On: March 12, 2004 18:43 CST
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That was cool!! Loved it! 1You write soo awesome!! wow that was such a great thing Hiei and the dream weaver came up with !! Hurry with more!
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Title: statring things off with a bang
Reviewed By: L_N (not logged in) On: March 12, 2004 14:56 CST
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Damn, I love the way you started the fic off. Of course, what's not to love about some dirty talking demons getting it on. But it establishes the relatiionship very well for me. It wasn't nessesary to have read the prequel (but I wil now, gawddamn I will!) to follow the fic. Or the show. (Though I did watch yesterday's ep to prep for this fic!) your baddie is baaaad, too. In a sick, fascinating way. I love really well done bad guys. This one, this one takes the cake. great job!
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Reviewed By: Evvy On: March 08, 2004 13:23 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yes! I'm so glad you updated again! Yikes, looks like both Hiei and Kurama have some guilty angst to deal with... I love how the plot is unfolding though, and can't wait until Kurama and Hiei get back together! And there HAS to be another K+H lemon!
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Reviewed By: NSBVEGETA *Not logged in* On: March 08, 2004 07:55 CST
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GOD DAMN IT YODA! JUST WHEN IS WAS GETTING GOOD!!!!! HOW DARE U DO THIS TO ME !!!!!! DAMN ALL!!!!! EVIL YODA EVIL CLIFFY!!!!! AHHHH! UPDATE!!!!!!! Give me Lemon Later !
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Reviewed By: Tatoosh [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2004 01:23 CST
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I refuse to have hope for liking the end of this story. Refuse. I love your writing and your characters, but you cannot be trusted and I REFUSE to believe the dream. I would love to be able to believe in that dream the chapter ended with, it was lovely. Pain can mke it so easy to be manipulated by those with evil intent. The only good thing was that Hiei realized he gave Argus the tool to claim Kurama with. The only thing I will let myself hope for is that Argus dies bloody, screaming, and utterly shocked at the end of the story. You are evil at times Jen, but I'm the fool for letting it get to me.
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Reviewed By: Saiyajin_Raven69 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2004 01:23 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok, I'm BLOWN AWAY by this fic!! I'm not a big YYH fan, I've only seen a few eps, as a matter of fact, but you've completely sucked me into this storyline!! I LOVE Argaus!! He's SO deliciously wicked!! He's such an enigma! It seems that he is genuinely doing everything that his is doing because he wants Kurama's love (or at least his devotion/submission?). He SEEMS to care for Kurama, but if he truly did, why would he purposely hurt/lie to him? Selfish little demon, isn't he? I WANT MORE!! I'm DYING to find out what happens when Kurama sees that Hiei is completely unharmed, and the entire ordeal has been one big illusion!! GAH!! Why aren't you writing?!?!
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