| "Lost Hearts" Reviews/Comments [ 55 ] |
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Reviewed By: YashaJunkie On: July 03, 2005 17:17 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really loved your story but I just realized that you never went anywhere with the whole Hojo thing, he said that it wasn't over but you never hear from him again. But I must say I just read the entire thing and it was great, I am currently reading Strictly Business and I am already into, I hope you keep up with the great stories.
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Reviewed By: ameera1130 On: April 10, 2005 12:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it it was da bomb!
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Reviewed By: InuFan91 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2004 18:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
WTF?!?!?! You put Kagome with Hojo? Omg! *goes and throws up* Yuck! I hope it turns into InuKag. But so far so good.
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Reviewed By: Doujo (dlg) On: November 26, 2004 19:51 CST
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Oh no, already the end!!! I'm saaaaad!!! But it's a happy ending!! :D I love your story... But I'm sad it's already finished :( It was really good, maybe you could make a fanfic about their world tour too... ^^ lol anyway, I'll also read your next story, and it's better be as good as this one! I'm sure it'll be. Well... it was a great story, I was about to write "update soon", but you can't update soon since it's already finished... "Start soon your next story!" then ^^
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Reviewed By: Doujo [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2004 20:08 CST
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wow that was more than good... but I kinda think that Kagome is a bit... i dunno how to say this, but anyway, I think that she should forgive Inu Yasha... I think she should know by now that he didn't have sex with Kikyo intentionnally! If I remember well, I think Inu Yasha said he was thinking about Kagome when he was doing sex with Kikyo, so I don't know why Kagome is hurt since Inu Yasha thought about her at this moment! And anyway, 3 months is long enough to forgive someone! lol. Inu Yasha must still have some remorse about that, so if she says she forgives him, it'll remove some heavy weight on Inu Yasha's shoulders. That's my opinion! Anyway. I'm quite sad your story is already ending... only 24 chapters, plus the epilogue! But I really love your story, I hope you'll update quite soon!! Wow that's the first time I'm doing a long review... o.O
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Reviewed By: Doujo [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2004 22:27 CDT
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hey?! you haven't update in years!! O.O What's going on? Are you dead or something?!! I'm still waiting ya know! I really love your story and I just can't stand it if you don't update! I want to know what will happen next! It can't be the end! (If it's so then it's a strange end) please, do something, like updating! Pleeeeease!!!! Or I'm going to sing and you DON'T wanna hear me singing...
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Title: LOve!!!
Reviewed By: Queen_of_Blades [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2004 20:16 CDT
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I love the story! Awsomeness... I cant remember if I have reviewed before or not. Anyways *Bad people... its hard to get thigns together a lot to post up stuff!* I feel bad... people have given up on me... i went into depression and havnt updated since Febuary. But I'm back now and going to post tonight... hopefull. Off trackness... sorry! Anyways... love it and cant wait to see more from you! Lots of Love ~Queeny~
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Reviewed By: Doujo [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2004 10:47 CDT
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oh come on... I'm waiting for your update for sooooooooooooo long!!!! O_O update please... I won't wait for so long! I really love your fic please update...!
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Reviewed By: Lor [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2004 00:54 CDT
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I just started reading it...and i noticed one thing that if it stays the way it is throughout your fic i'm gonna end up screaming bloody murder. IT'S BASS NOT BASE!!!!!!!!! B-A-S-S!!!! sorry but I'm a bass player and anything that isn't right when it comes to the bass drives me insane.
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Reviewed By: sabriel7 (not logged in) On: July 13, 2004 00:12 CDT
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Oh! Almost forgot, Strictly Buisness (sp?) and 'Just a Favor' (I think that's what you called them) look like very good fics, I would love to see them done!
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Reviewed By: sabriel7 (not logged on) On: July 13, 2004 00:10 CDT
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Very nice chapter, it almost made me cry! I hope you update soon, I hate to see them so sad. :( P.S. You said something about an editor, i'd be happy to if you need someone! P.S. My e-mail(s): cheetah_girl7@hotmail.com kagome_miko@hotmail.com
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Reviewed By: Kim2090 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2004 21:22 CDT
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I liked the chapter, and you finally updated.(Do it again soon, please). About the two stories, they both sound excelent right now,my feelings are towards "Strictly Business" but which ever you choose to do first will be OK, cause again they both sound quite interesting. Until next chapter.
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Title: YAY
Reviewed By: AngelOfDiamonds~Lia~ On: July 12, 2004 20:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awww. . . he's finally getting a second chance. I love your story please keep up the good work and update soon. About your story ideas I think both of them sound great! and if you still need a beta reader or editor, i'll be glad to help out! e-mail me at InuChan2787@yahoo.com or Kicks2787@cox.net love ya story AngelOfDiamonds, Lia, InuChan
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Reviewed By: Doujo [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2004 15:31 CDT
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awww... something is saying me that it won't be a good end!!!! WHY!?!??!? I'm almost sure (and I hope I'm wrong) that Inu Yasha and Kagome won't be together!! you scare me to death ya know!! REVIEW AS SOON AS POSSIBLE! I want to know the end!! PLEASE!
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Title: lost hearts
Reviewed By: inu/kaglover On: July 02, 2004 14:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like your story. hope you write soon.plz.:D
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