| "Lost Hearts" Reviews/Comments [ 55 ] |
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Reviewed By: Ryu Sachiko Sama [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2004 14:36 CST
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Luvin' it!!! I reallly do! plz continue!
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Title: I like. I like.
Reviewed By: Usagi183 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2003 18:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm really enjoying this story. Not many people go down the 'band' path, and fewer do it well. You've managed to do something rather original with it. The characters are all there, albeit a lil out of character at times though. The really noticable one is Sesshy. But besides that, keep up the good work. I also really like that your updating quickly, even if they're short chapters. Short and often is better than long and strung out.
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Reviewed By: sango9540 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2003 08:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow i really hope u get 2 read this review, because my computer won;t let me go on ff.net (don't ask, i think my computer is possessed) ne wayz great chapter, and the jessica simpson song is sooooooo kagome!! lol!!! and inuyasha just needs 2 come out and say that he likes kagome, i mean it isn't that difficult!!! but ne wayz hope u update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: sango9540 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2003 16:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
good chapter!! ugh.. but all that moving must have really sucked!!! lol!! oh well!!! ne wayz hope u updae soon!!! this story is getting good!!! can't wait 2 c what happens when they go on tour!!! maybe ure story will change 2 NC-17, lol i guess we will find out soon!! update soon!! and have a happy new year!!!
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Reviewed By: Queen_of_Blades [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2003 17:19 CST
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I really liked it. I hope you keep updating! I think you should spend a little more time with each character like what there thinking. Describe some. It makes it very intresting and paints a picture. If you good people feel like their in the house with them. Me I still suck at it but whatever hehe! Queen of the Blades
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Reviewed By: lovin_sesshomaru_isnteasy [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2003 23:30 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good, but kinda boring. Sighs. More fighting, Inu Yasha needs to be cockier, and Kouga should be all lovey dovey! This is a fan fic damnit! make something of it. I always thought Shippou had a crush on Kagome. Hmm. Sesshomaru should be meaner!!!!!!!!!! Meaner. I'm telling you, Sesshou does NOT laugh. Update soon ^_^ or i might sick ravenous cows upon your withering soul ^_*
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Reviewed By: sango9540 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2003 17:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow!! this story just keeps gettin better and better!! and that was so mean of fluffy 2 threaten 2 take inuyasha's ramen!! i mean what would the world come 2 if he didn't have his ramen? lol ne wayz i hope u update soon!!!!
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Title: Hey yo!
Reviewed By: lovin_sesshomaru_isnteasy [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2003 19:45 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like your fic so far, no more songs from Brittney, or I might not have the same enjoyment facter. Brand New is an OK band, you've got funky faves. Sesshomaru was so in character I had to laugh. Kagome shouldn't be such a cry baby. It was only Hojo. I hate Hojo. I hate Kikyo. No Kikyo. Please. well, update soon ^_^
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Reviewed By: sango9540 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2003 15:44 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg if u stop writting this fic i will have 2 jump in2 my computer and do some serious damage!! this fic is 2 good 2 stop writting!!! i must know what happens!!! and that stupid idiot hojo (or homo as i like 2 call him) can die!! stupid idiot had no idea what kind of girl he had!!! please please please update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: sabriel7 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2003 01:41 CST
Comment/Review:
I LUV this story, I've always liked band stories, this one seems unique! Anyway update soon!
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