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| "DO YOU WANT TO BE IN MY DRAGONBALLZ TOURNAMENT" Reviews/Comments [ 13 ] | Title: MariaS
Reviewed By: MariaS [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2005 23:06 CDT
Comment/Review:
That was awesome do more chapters
| Reviewed By: Love Of Vegeta [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2005 06:58 CST
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Umm, so sorry to spoil your fun, but aren't these sort of fics banned on mm.org now? Oh well, if you don't get caught, I suppose you can have your fun ^_^ I'm just warning you this might get deleted. I like how the story's goin NEway, try to improve your S+G a bit more though.
| Reviewed By: BIG_DADDY [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2004 02:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dude, I could barely understand a single word you were saying! I know you may be an illiterate but PLEASE pay attention in English class. Also, if you can, use spell check. Most programs come with it. Anyways, see if you can correct that last chapter and I may change my views on this fic. Also, see about adding a plot line. I know it may seem like much work but trust me. It will be worth it in the end. Anyways, hope to see this back in action soon!
| Reviewed By: Nouk [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2004 19:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
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Powerlevel: 2.000.000, but yet unable to reach the 3rd level of supersaiyan. Maybe a good fight will change that. And allso: I'm not too muscled, wear black sporty- shorts, a black tanktop and a red jacket on top.
| Reviewed By: Nouk [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2004 19:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Allright! My name is Nouk, I'm a 18-year old girl, I'm half Saiyan, half (black) human, my skin is cinnamoon- colored, got black eyes and black curly hair 'till my shoulders. Aint got no tail, so I get underastimated because I look like an ordinary human. This is how I kick ass: - A small, pea-sized ki-attack that changes gravity so dramatticly it creates a small black hole, sucking everything up untill I tell it to stop. - A humongous pink ki-attack, meant to scare my enemy, but all it does is stick to him/her like hubba-bubba and annoy the heck out of them. - An attack that looks like lightning. My uncle is a Pikachu. :) - And I'm espaccially good at fighting with my legs and feet, while powering up a medium-sized random ki-blast. Good points: -I'm good at doing 2 or more attacks at once. -I'm good ad evading. -I make some rather nasty remarks to get the enemy angry and sloppy... Weaknesses: -I don't protect my chest and stomach-area enough. - I'm afraid of hights, so I WIL NOT UNDER ANY SURCUMSTANCE FLY!! Witch probably means I'm toast. maybe later I'll conquer my fear?
| Title: Re post it
Reviewed By: Maria S [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2004 10:28 CST
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I think you should update again if you want more people's antention to see it ok
| Reviewed By: BIG_DADDY [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2003 14:22 CST
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| Title: statistics
Reviewed By: BIG_DADDY [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2003 23:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Height: 7'4" Weight: 223 lbs. Lowest power level: 1,000,000,000 Intemediate power level: 5,000,000,000 Maximum power level: 9,876,543,210 (x18 when enraged) additional powers when at his maximum level: Mind Control, every power of the machine mutants from DBGT, and ESP.
| Title: A few mor things
Reviewed By: BIG_DADDY [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2003 23:45 CST
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Hello! A few more things you should know about me. I can create copies of myself whenever I am cut in two or whenever I feel like it. I can also destroy objects up to 900,000 mi. away and I can repair my body like Kid Buu.
| Title: SO COOL
Reviewed By: Maria S [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2003 14:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Name: Maria hight:5'5 Description: Pale Blond hair, teal eyes, well endowed breast, well tone body, and highly powerful. DBZ FACT: Akira never meant for female saiyans to reach SSJ. which is ashame, but we can make them as strong as we them to. Power level: Stronger than Mystic Gohan but when enraged she has the ability to become 20x stronger aganst anyone she fights, (like Keio Ken only it wont wear out untill her opponent is either unconsious, dead or her anger is spent) Healing powers: Can heal anyone in seconds including herself. Barrier: Can shield herself and others in protective energy shield. Target hit blast: call out the name of object or person you want to hit, this technique will ONLY target that object or person that you told it to hit, like a heat seeking missile it will fallow and the blast will go through other Object &/or person like a transparent ghost so it wont distroy anything or anyone in its path but the target it was ordored to distroy. Solor Flar:Blinding white light Spirit bomb: Collecting Engergy around her to use agaist enemies. Teleporting: Laser vison: Telepath: Able to read thoughts and comunicate from one mind to another. Telekinesis: Able to move objects with ones mind. Slicer Disk: Same as Distructo Disk only blue Cosmic wave Blast: Large blue energy Blast just as powerfull as Kamahamaha wave
| Title: WICKED COOL!
Reviewed By: BIG_DADDY [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2003 16:12 CST
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'sup y'all! put me in your fic. Power Level: 9,876,543,210 Techniques: Instant Recovery, Instant Transmission, Big Bang Attack, Final Flash, Kamehameha, Black Inferno, Planet Splitter, Masenko Ha, Makankosappo and Black Spirit Bomb. I can go SS1, SS2, SS3, and SS4. I can conrol the emlemnts of nature. I can raise fallen allies and foes alike. When ever I go SS4 I get jet black hair with silver highlights and a black fur. For more info about my chracter contact me at shenron009@sbcglobal.net
| Title: I Do
Reviewed By: Mar [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2003 16:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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| Title: Cool idea
Reviewed By: Crecy [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2003 14:54 CST
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Sounds like a cool idea. Okay..... My name is Crecy, My attacks are controlling fire, Back Draft, and Dragon's spiral, Go here to understand them, http://www.mediaminer.org/fanfic/view_ch.php/39350/109500/ And my power is at third super saiyan, one exception though, I'm a dark super saiyan. I have red hair and green eyes and they both turn black. any other questions or concerns about my character, Plez caontact me a ambroid_crecy@yahoo.com
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