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Title: *waves*
Reviewed By: sugarcoated_ [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2015 00:25 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi LavenderGoddess, I've been leaving reviews all over the place
after tearing through your stories once more. It's been so great
coming back to this fandom and finding all of your writings and
some new ones I wasn't familiar with. Having read a lot of your
fics in a short span of time it is really nice to see how your
writing evolved over the years. The only shame is that we do not
get to enjoy your talent anymore, with 'that' one unfinished fic
lingering about. I do hope that you are living a happy life!
Perhaps one day you will return to us in a flash of inspiration. ;)
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Title: I want More!!!!
Reviewed By: vegeta and future trunks [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2015 19:55 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW i loved reading this soooo much, i kept smiling while reading,
its truly a great story! I honestly wish there was more of a lemon
though :( but anyway i loved how vegeta finally dropped his guard
to bulma and confessed how he felt (awww). lol when vegeta said
that goku was better looking than him, i wish i was bulma cuz i
would have slapped the sense into him! We all know Vegeta's
looks>than Goku's looks =D like come on...I loved the points
that bulma made when she brought up how goku would rather stay dead
for years than be at home with his family and how he left chichi
alone pregnant. Everyone wants to talk shit about how vegeta is a
bad guy but look at the shit that goku has done, which bulma surely
argued. I was so pleased with her argument! i almost shed a tear
when finding out how vegeta got bulma a yellow orchid on her
b-day(awww) and how he escorts her home from work :) You're truly a
great writer! I wish to read more stories like this from you
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Reviewed By: Zhekee [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2009 15:18 PDT
Comment/Review:
funny and an interesting fic, enjoyed reading it.
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Title: What a nice fic
Reviewed By: Caprice [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2008 22:40 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hello, I wonder if you still read reviews to your stories being that it's been a year since you last posted something, but I as I always say, I have a strange compulsion to review everything I read. I must say that this is the best piece I've read thus far from you. I believed the story, it had punch, it was endearing, romantic and did not turn sappy. One of the best BV pieces out there. Caprice
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Reviewed By: Silver Lady Crazy [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2008 03:02 PDT
Comment/Review:
Awww... that was both beautiful and hot! Yeah, Goku and Bulma never would work together. Though I find funny Vegeta confessing he thinks Goku "looks better" than him.
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Reviewed By: wudelfin [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2007 21:47 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
now that a confession of the heart. quite lovely I must say
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Reviewed By: Kichi [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2007 16:21 PST
Comment/Review:
aww that was soo very sweet! Insecure Vegeta is so endearing and sad!
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Reviewed By: Mely On: July 31, 2005 11:57 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I thought I read all of your fics, I guess I'm wrong. I like how Vegeta was insecure about Bulma. Poor guy has feelings too! Great story!
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Title: LOVED IT!!!!
Reviewed By: DBZBoyLuver [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2005 19:27 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! I LOVED this fic! Especially when Vegeta admitted he thought Goku was better-looking tan him! Sweet and cute fic!
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Title: URg
Reviewed By: Sulawesi [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2004 13:53 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
"I know Kakarrot is a better man than me. I know he's better looking than me. And I know he has more to offer a woman than I do. " -Vegeta LIES ALL OF THEM!!!!!!!!! Rather mad that you even thought of haveing him say that but it was a super good one-shot. Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: May-VeggieGirl1 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2004 14:50 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aww, that was sweet. I like the way she puts it but it's just...so un-Vegeta like. Of course, I can see the emotional side of this all, so it's gewd!! ^^
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Reviewed By: Fibs On: December 24, 2003 07:07 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow ! It was perfect. What else to say ? I LOVED it. Oh, and Bulma IS definitely a THOUSAND times prettier than ChiChi, thanks for pointing this out. I couldn't believe CC actually had the nerve to say that in the Japanese version. Anyway, good job.
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Reviewed By: loulou4729 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2003 10:28 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awwwww, a very cute lemon treat! Always was a fan of your works :)
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Reviewed By: spini On: December 15, 2003 07:55 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I love this one-shot! It´s great. Bulma explained how important Vegeta is to her. It´s beautiful. Just brilliant!!! continue writing
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Reviewed By: Evil Saint (not signed in) On: December 15, 2003 00:47 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another great story! Thanks so much for coming back. You've been sorely missed ^_~
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