| "Communtiy Service Well Spent" Reviews/Comments [ 13 ] |
Reviewed By: BlizzardAngel [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2009 01:22 CST
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i've reviewed this story before i'm sure i think at ff.net or something but if you could just post the last of your writings or how exactly you were going to finish it maybe someone could help u finish it if thats the problem but this is really a great story and had such promise, maybe you can pick it back up again?
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Reviewed By: fujinakaheero (not signed in) On: July 25, 2004 17:15 CDT
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You need to update this story sometime soon, I've been following this story for a while now and I'm still waiting for ur new chapter *sighs* I really do hope u update sometime soon cause i would hate to see this story left not finished, it's got a really really good plot line to it and no matter how long or short the chapter is, it's still good. SO PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!! *makes puppy eyes* pwease >.
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Reviewed By: Squallysbitch On: July 18, 2004 12:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love the story but im upset by the lack of updates i wanna see what happens that brought the score down a bit
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Reviewed By: nobodysanyone On: June 30, 2004 18:40 CDT
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I like this story. Its cute, but not overly so, and it has a good ammount of angst, which I like. The only thing I have against it is that you make all of the girls, except Quistis, royal bitches.
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Reviewed By: Queen of Shadows [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2004 21:22 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yay, they're ok! I'm glad laguna was ok with everything. i'm sure he'll sort everything out with the hospital in the morning. And i'm sure i really did say something on my last review, dont't understand why it's blank...i dunno. update soon!
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Reviewed By: queen of shadows [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2004 21:20 CDT
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Reviewed By: dev_chieftain [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2004 20:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, I like the story quite a bit. It's not Hemmingway, but then, if it was, there would have been no gratification, right? ^_~ hope you continue soon...and hope that things work out in the end.
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Reviewed By: Squallyalmasy On: March 16, 2004 18:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is one of the best SxS fics ive read in a while and ive read quite a few it would be perfect if it got updated a little more frequently but big props on the idea
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Title: More?
Reviewed By: Simon Erif [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2004 07:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like the idea you came up with, its not the most original but very well thought of. It seems realistic and true and it could have happened for all I know. Your style is very dramatic and angst based but it works with the plot very well. I like it that you don't just come out with the whole plot after few chapters but you keep the suspense going in every chapter with little hints and clues every now and then. I'd really love to read more of this story in the future.
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Reviewed By: Fujinakaheero2 On: February 03, 2004 19:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm glad u updated finally! I really like the new chapters, i hope u write more soon cuz this is really interesting to read. I have already written a review for this story but i thought i would write another one just cuz im nice and still inlove with this story! Please write more soon! Fujinakaheero aka Hee-chan~~
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Reviewed By: OokamiDraconius [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2004 16:54 CST
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Hey, you moved over here!! I've been following it over on FF, but I hate that place...cool stuff! More story please! *holds out plate for yaoi* i luv this story....
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Reviewed By: fujinakaheero [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2003 12:39 CST
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Really really really good story... I love it!!! It's probably one of the best Seifer/Squall stroies that I have read yet! Please write more I really want to know what happens next, I hope Squall can get out of there, that would b cool. I think it's funny tho that Zell is in there for his hyperness (mayb I should be in there then =/ ) oh I kinda side tracked there. Ne ways Please write more I think this is an awesome fic so far!!! Ok im out Fujinakaheero
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Reviewed By: Amora Laflour [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2003 21:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay I loved this fic. Loved it. You really need to write it more and remember that reveiws aren't everything! Cause this is one of the best ive read so far. i want you to continue *begins to cry* man that was good
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