| "Happily Edward After" Reviews/Comments [ 16 ] |
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Reviewed By: ldymoon(nsi) On: September 27, 2006 00:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
this was a wonderful short story. I loved the fact that Ed was in her twenties. Let me see if he died at 27 and nine years later he was brought back because he wasn't really dead and then he met up with her she would be 22 yrs old cuz in the anime she is 13. Jet would be 45 and Faye would be 32. And, it would be reasonable that Ed would crush on him, maybe that is why she was searching the Bebop to begin with.
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Title: Really good
Reviewed By: todavialoca [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2006 16:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my god! I really loved this fanfic. ...you really have to write what happens next! ill be waiting !!! lol
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Title: Brilliant Interpretation
Reviewed By: Captain Bob [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2006 00:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I thought that this was one of the best FanFics I have read in a long time. The storyline regarding Ed being a beautiful grown up woman and falling in love with Spike is absolutely brilliant and sexy! Keep up the good work.
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Title: Learn to write better.
Reviewed By: Kisenianblossom [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2005 16:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Comment/Review:
I didn't even read this. I honestly was going to, but when I found your style of writing to be nothing but basically script form, I knew it was going to be a drag. There's the review. Deal with it. (Don't like flames, do ya.) Have a nice day.
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Reviewed By: ashiya On: August 01, 2005 01:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
SpikexEd *____* People SHOULD write that one more. Really great fic, it made me very happy ^__^ Only thing I could suggest is showing us a bit more of the characters' feelings, developing these feelings a bit better (though it would have to be a longer fic), I dunno, and the grammar... but it's a great work anyway ^^
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Title: yay
Reviewed By: Takumi Fugiwara [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2005 10:00 CDT
Comment/Review:
i really enjoyed that it was very good, and you have further proved that people should write more spike X ed fics.
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Title: nice fic
Reviewed By: joshua hunter8374 On: June 15, 2005 12:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i liked this alot i like the couple ed/spike if u ever do another ed and spike fic please email me josh20_3@hotmail.com i was kinder hoping u could do one last chapter not long just saying how they got on later life
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Title: Great story
Reviewed By: Draco Storm Dragon On: December 08, 2004 23:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the way you made the story and he way you struchtured the love between spike and Ed they are my fav paring faye and spike parings are boaring there are toooo many of those I wish I could give you more than a ten I'm re typing my OLS/BDZ story because fanfiction.net deleted it and I would love If you told me what you think I'f it's okay with you I'll e-mail you when I post it and again YOU ARE GREAT!!!!! (don't get an ego)
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Reviewed By: camintmier [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2004 00:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Pretty good. It would be helpful to make the story easier to read though, like by putting each person's dialog on a seperate line There were parts of the story where I had to re-read it to determine who was speaking. It's a good start. Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: Kitsune fan On: March 21, 2004 20:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good writing. excellent story line. i never thought of that pair. i'm putting it on my favorites list.
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Reviewed By: Madcap On: February 15, 2004 06:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very fun to read... different, unexpected story line. I understand the flow of the text but some names would help when there is only a presumed character. Please keep writing, I have really enjoyed it...
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Reviewed By: pusspliter [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2004 21:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic is on my top 5 list,great fic keep going.
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Reviewed By: MidNight-Kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2004 19:50 CST
Comment/Review:
P.S.update soon ^__^
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Title: GREAT ^__^
Reviewed By: MidNight-Kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2004 19:49 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
SOOOOOOOOOOO SWEET ^___^ that was a great story.lemony goodnes spi/ed amzaing^__~ your a great writer keep up the go work.
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Reviewed By: Me On: December 29, 2003 17:24 CST
Comment/Review:
Oh I love this beginning!! It's so good. Please write more! And soon! I love this pairing so much. hehe. ~Tabitha, The Mad Hatter aka Angry Blood Sister
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