| "Goodbye To You" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Title: the bane of your existance
Reviewed By: Skyre Moonfire [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2004 17:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awwww . . . how sweet. I was almost crying at the end. But that could be from all the dust in my room at the moment. *attackes computer with a feather duster* Much better. No more watery eyes. Well, anyway, I like this. It fits the series very well and shows just what is going on without wrecking the story line for those that havn't read that manga. Nice job on it.
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Reviewed By: Athena-Lee On: January 25, 2004 17:48 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Comment/Review:
I liked this. Good job. Hopefully you'll keep writing.
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Reviewed By: Mononoke (no logged in right now) On: January 23, 2004 16:26 CST
Comment/Review:
Wow, that was well orchestrated, but a little rushed feeling. You should try to slow down and put some more filler in there sometime. But I liked it, and I love FAKE to.
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