| "Enemy Mine" Reviews/Comments [ 100 ] |
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Reviewed By: KitsuneFox [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2005 18:55 CDT
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yay! A new chapter!! I'm so sorry that I haven't reviewed yet because I forgot to check! Sorry! But this chapter was great...sad, yes, but great all the same! Goddamed Inuyasha doin' that to Kagome and then leavin'! But anywho! Keep up writing. I like it a lot!!! ^.^
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Reviewed By: JackoVance [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2005 21:57 CDT
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Well, good chapter. It's nice to see that at least one of my favorite authors is still updating. The ending of this last chapter was really great. I'm really interested in which way this story will develop. Your nearly the only reason way I'm still visitig this site. So please continue this story and update soon.
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Reviewed By: Zelix [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2005 07:08 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank you for updating at last, that was a good chapter... a bit angsty at the end but that was to be expected and i think i can guess the following chapters will be quite angsty as well... i just hope that not for long. Please update soon again, since you are one of my most favourite authors by far.
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Reviewed By: Tyashaay14 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2005 04:53 CDT
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OMG how could Inuyasha tell her love has nothing to do with it, that was just soooo stupid, he's such a...guy...lol...I need to know what happens next!! please update soon...luvs Ty
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Reviewed By: sublimetrickster (not logged in) On: August 05, 2005 04:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoy this story, it's wonderfully thought out and has little things such as cultural additions and character interactions in it that really add to its originality. I hope that you still plan to work on it, even though it's been a while. Keep up the hard work, it's worth it!
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Reviewed By: Radish [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2005 02:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
For all your talk of a lost muse, you've still written a perfectly entertaining story. Never crossed my mind that Inuyasha is a pervert. I'm sure he would have preferred she were awake and willing the whole time. But, from what I gather, as the spell is wearing off his demon instincts are getting more and more the better of him. On another note, strange that he can think to himself with such sincere conviction that Kagome deserves to be loved, deserves the best in the world, so on and so forth, and not realise that those thoughts are a sign that he loves her. But he always is a silly man. Oh, and I don't understand the warning of OOCness, so far everyone's perfectly in character, taking into account the different pasts they now have and the different circumstances they find themselves in. Though Kagome does fall in love pretty easy. *shrug* Hojo and Kikyo are really different, I guess, but who cares about them? Hmm, this review has turned out a bit longer than I intended. It will suddenly end now.
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Reviewed By: Shiori_Baka [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2005 18:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
sorry about your grandma and dad dieing all in one week(sp?). but i know how it feels to have a father die and you cant do anything about it.my dad died and we/my imtit(sp)family tyd CPR but that did not work and he died.but my grandpa died almost a year before my dad died and my dad died march 29,2004.well my grandpa died a day before his b-day and that was in January 2004 i think.but your story is good.bye.bye.
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Title: Great fic
Reviewed By: InuGrrrl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2005 06:23 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm really enjoying this & i loved the lil' lemon cliffie. Your overall style of writing is very good -thanks for sharing. Lastly, my deepest sympathies for your loss. I lost my mom, grandma & godmother (my only parents) so i know how much it hurts. Take it one day at a time and if you need to cry -do it. Trust me, it helps. They'll always be with you in spirit. Hugs, Sakura
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Reviewed By: JackoVance [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2005 18:03 CDT
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I've no time to leave a decent review but I wanted to thank you for being back.
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: June 27, 2005 17:28 CDT
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Definately a unique way of doing it, I think it worked very nicely. It will be interesting to see how she reacts having woken up to find him like that...I wonder what will happen. Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: June 27, 2005 17:23 CDT
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That was a beautiful chapter, thank you for continuing this story. So, it would seem that the two are drawn to one another yet neither one will make a move. I think in the end it will have to be Inuyasha who stakes his claim, perhaps if he offers to take her and her brother with him. Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Title: no way...
Reviewed By: foxfire730 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2005 15:27 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you are truly evil cutting it off right there, but if there...more... in the next chapter i'll accept! wow! update soon! and i don't think inu's a perv... if he did that to me i would be sooooooooooo happy!
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Title: You're evil, you know that right?
Reviewed By: Zelix (Not signed in) On: June 27, 2005 15:01 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NOOO!!! That was just plain evil, leaving it like that! Man, you got me all fired up and then, *bam* it's over... update soon, i'm begging you, please update soon!
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Reviewed By: marijang69 *not logged in* On: June 27, 2005 09:40 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
whoopee!!! LOL hehe you updated!!! aahahahhah!!!! I am SO happy!!! =D i hope you update soon!!!!!
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Reviewed By: KitsuneFox [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2005 22:44 CDT
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0.0 You updated! Yay!!!!! Oh, thank you, thank you, thank you! ^.^ I'm so happy I think I'll talk my mother into sharing her long island mix with me! I've done it before I'll do it again! >.
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