| "Enemy Mine" Reviews/Comments [ 100 ] |
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: January 27, 2005 17:35 CST
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It was an excellent chapter, as always. If I were him I would grab Kagome, Souta, and run oike hell. It might not be the best plan in the world but at least she and her borther would be safe. I look forwards to the next chapter when you are able, I hope everything comes out alright in the end. Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: JackoVance [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2005 14:47 CST
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Better short then nothing. Thank you. Now I have something to do tonight. Once again thank you. You're the best but you could be better ;)
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Reviewed By: Growing Impatient On: January 22, 2005 16:29 CST
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Up Date this damn story already!!!!!
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Title: I love your story^-~
Reviewed By: inulover^-^ On: November 25, 2004 23:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
All I have to say is I love this story and you have to update please!!!! as you know love is a very strong word...so figure it out from there.
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Title: Please
Reviewed By: HanyouNozomi On: August 31, 2004 10:35 CDT
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Please Please Please up date this fanfic i love this fic so please don't end it right at the point you left it. if you need help with writers block say so i'm sure that i could bounce a few ideas off of you considering i'm a nutcase
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Reviewed By: akashafive [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2004 12:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this story, please update!!!
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Reviewed By: lemon_lover [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2004 03:58 CDT
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for not having your muse you put out a good chapter short but good please update soon
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Reviewed By: DBZ Lover (not in) On: July 12, 2004 13:14 CDT
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Well, at least he's doing SOMETHING nice for once. Damn, I swear to god I'd forgotten about this story, if it weren't on my favorites list I wouldn't have ever known you'd updated! Anywayz, great chapter, hope you update soon, and maybe a bit more frequently if you have the time!
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Title: hey
Reviewed By: Slywolf9 *n. s. i.* On: July 10, 2004 18:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey Mija-Chaaaan!!!! I LOVED it! I'm SOOOOO glad you updated! You know what? "glances around" dont tell, but i think you're my favoritest authoress here! "Grins" I just LOVE ALL your stories! But anyways, I liked this chapter pretty well. I hope you get some more ideas soon..."looks anxious" cause i really love this story. And I cant wait for you to update Blood Oath too. Vause they are all really good. But anyways, I rant. Hope ta see you soon! Ja Ne! -Sly
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Reviewed By: antisocial mint ( ) On: July 09, 2004 15:06 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
s'cool how can he smell infatuation though? i liked the chap it was nice. please update soon
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Reviewed By: Okaasan-7 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2004 15:03 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
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I'm enjoying the story but the spelling needs a little work. Here are a few I caught: immediatly--immediately, pointate--potentate; surficed--sufficed; plaqued--plagued; thier--their; nieve--naive; wentch--wench. I don't mention this to be mean but because your mechanics are pretty good otherwise and I thought you might want to make corrections.
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Reviewed By: cherios On: July 09, 2004 11:42 CDT
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okie hi i luv ur story n think u write absolutely fine w/o ur muse but hey if they inspire u then i too hope they come back soon please update soon thanks bye
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Reviewed By: TooLazyToSignInAtTheMoment22 On: July 09, 2004 07:44 CDT
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YAY! Thanks for updating! Your story is great! Mute
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: July 09, 2004 04:29 CDT
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That was abeautiful chapter. The interactions between them played out perfectly once again. The descriptions of the inner workings of their minds consise and to the point. Especially like the way Kagome is slowly become more enamored of him while he too is heading the same way even if he does not realise it yet. Look forwards to seeing more when your muse returns. Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: MutelyMe22 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2004 04:01 CDT
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Very good. Hope you update soon I thought it was really interesting!
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