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Reviewed By: Radish [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2005 02:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
For all your talk of a lost muse, you've still written a perfectly entertaining story. Never crossed my mind that Inuyasha is a pervert. I'm sure he would have preferred she were awake and willing the whole time. But, from what I gather, as the spell is wearing off his demon instincts are getting more and more the better of him. On another note, strange that he can think to himself with such sincere conviction that Kagome deserves to be loved, deserves the best in the world, so on and so forth, and not realise that those thoughts are a sign that he loves her. But he always is a silly man. Oh, and I don't understand the warning of OOCness, so far everyone's perfectly in character, taking into account the different pasts they now have and the different circumstances they find themselves in. Though Kagome does fall in love pretty easy. *shrug* Hojo and Kikyo are really different, I guess, but who cares about them? Hmm, this review has turned out a bit longer than I intended. It will suddenly end now.
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Reviewed By: Shiori_Baka [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2005 18:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
sorry about your grandma and dad dieing all in one week(sp?). but i know how it feels to have a father die and you cant do anything about it.my dad died and we/my imtit(sp)family tyd CPR but that did not work and he died.but my grandpa died almost a year before my dad died and my dad died march 29,2004.well my grandpa died a day before his b-day and that was in January 2004 i think.but your story is good.bye.bye.
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Title: Great fic
Reviewed By: InuGrrrl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2005 06:23 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm really enjoying this & i loved the lil' lemon cliffie. Your overall style of writing is very good -thanks for sharing. Lastly, my deepest sympathies for your loss. I lost my mom, grandma & godmother (my only parents) so i know how much it hurts. Take it one day at a time and if you need to cry -do it. Trust me, it helps. They'll always be with you in spirit. Hugs, Sakura
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Reviewed By: JackoVance [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2005 18:03 CDT
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I've no time to leave a decent review but I wanted to thank you for being back.
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: June 27, 2005 17:28 CDT
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Definately a unique way of doing it, I think it worked very nicely. It will be interesting to see how she reacts having woken up to find him like that...I wonder what will happen. Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: June 27, 2005 17:23 CDT
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That was a beautiful chapter, thank you for continuing this story. So, it would seem that the two are drawn to one another yet neither one will make a move. I think in the end it will have to be Inuyasha who stakes his claim, perhaps if he offers to take her and her brother with him. Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Title: no way...
Reviewed By: foxfire730 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2005 15:27 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you are truly evil cutting it off right there, but if there...more... in the next chapter i'll accept! wow! update soon! and i don't think inu's a perv... if he did that to me i would be sooooooooooo happy!
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Title: You're evil, you know that right?
Reviewed By: Zelix (Not signed in) On: June 27, 2005 15:01 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NOOO!!! That was just plain evil, leaving it like that! Man, you got me all fired up and then, *bam* it's over... update soon, i'm begging you, please update soon!
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Reviewed By: marijang69 *not logged in* On: June 27, 2005 09:40 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
whoopee!!! LOL hehe you updated!!! aahahahhah!!!! I am SO happy!!! =D i hope you update soon!!!!!
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Reviewed By: KitsuneFox [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2005 22:44 CDT
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0.0 You updated! Yay!!!!! Oh, thank you, thank you, thank you! ^.^ I'm so happy I think I'll talk my mother into sharing her long island mix with me! I've done it before I'll do it again! >.
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Title: Chapter Eight
Reviewed By: Son Lila On: June 26, 2005 20:32 CDT
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YOUR BACK!!!! I almost danced with happiness when I saw the update, I was so happy. I'm really glad your writing again and just want to say that I have been missing your stories. I'm going through a hard time right now as well, my dog Lassie isn't doing so well. The vet says she won't make it to the end of the year, that her kidneys are failing really fast. It's really scary because she went from being slighty overweight to super skinny in such a short time! I'm afraid to even pick her up and she's always shaking. I know she's not a person but I love her so much that I'm going crazy with worrying about her. But, your update has really lifted my spirits, and I love the chapter. Please continue with your writing because your stories are among my favorites and I will continue to read them for as long you write them. Keep your spirits up, ja ne! ^_~
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Reviewed By: Zelix (Not signed in) On: June 26, 2005 05:52 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YES!! Thank you for updating, i've been waiting ages for this... though you had a heavily good reason not to update for a long while, i know how you feel. But just so you know, no matter how long the gaps between updates, i will read your stories without fail, for you are one of my most favourite authors. I wish you luck and hope for the best, you deserve it.
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Reviewed By: KitsuneFox (yet again) On: May 29, 2005 21:01 CDT
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I also know how you feel. My grandmother died just last year and whenever I think about her I start to cry and well...good luck.
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Title: T.T
Reviewed By: KitsuneFox (not signed in) On: May 29, 2005 20:59 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
T.T I spent hours looking for your fic! Now...now I'll never know what Inuyasha's gonna do to Hojo! *sobs* I've always wanted to read this fic but up till now I haven't been able to find it! Gomen nasai about your father and grandmother. I know you may never see this review but at least it'll be out of my system. Luv, the very sad, KitsuneFox
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Title: im so sorry for your losses
Reviewed By: Elena On: May 14, 2005 23:40 CDT
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My deepest condolences, it is hard to lose family members. My aunt and her husband died of cancer this year, and my grandpa died of heart failure a week ago. Your story is fabulous, keep on going.
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