| "Beautifully Broken" Reviews/Comments [ 16 ] |
Reviewed By: ViolentFluid [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2005 00:54 CDT
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My first N/K fic I didn't like so much, but this one (my second) I really loved. The only thing I was confused about is who is she making happy? Is it the demons within him?
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Title: Ummm
Reviewed By: SRP (not logged in) On: June 27, 2005 00:58 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
well this was...well..it was pretty good...i got a little lost in the begging....( at first i either figured..kag/some original character...then it hit me...ebony hair? red eyes? OH! its kag/nar....*shiver* he gives me the heebie geebiez...lol....anyway i liked it..just got lost...hhmm... thats common for me...XD any-hoo write more please....and i'll promise to read/review all your stories! SRP
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Reviewed By: akuma_river (not signed in) On: June 17, 2004 23:02 CDT
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Love it. Naraka Kagome pairings always a certain niche to them that I love. Keep up the great work.
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Title: *sniff* I LOVED IT!!! ^.^
Reviewed By: Heavenly Faye-Faye On: June 02, 2004 16:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
^___________^ I LOVE Nar/Kag!!!!! It's my favorite pairing in the world!!!! *bows* Thank you, thak you, thank you! This made my day! Oh, to the person who thought it was Kikyo/Naraku, HA! HAHAHAHAHAHA!! U peeps make me laugh. Nar/Kag is the best alternate pairing to write in the world! ^__^ I should know, I'm writing two at the moment on ff.net! Why can't people open their eyes to such a brilliant idea?! The first person who ever thought up the fact that Naraku and Kagome could be a pairing should resceive a prize... I loved this fic, because it was so well written and very discriptive. It was obviously NarakuKag 2 NarKag fans.GO YOU, FANS!!! ^____^ In short: This was one kick @$$ fic! Be proud of yourself! -^.^-
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Reviewed By: paige89^_^ On: May 06, 2004 22:55 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was GREAT! I loved it! I love Naraku/Kagome fics^_^ And it was VERY well written.
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Reviewed By: purplehaze On: May 04, 2004 17:14 CDT
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ok im gonna guess nar/kag. it was good, really you shoudl write another chapter to clarify the pairing though
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Title: You can't fool me ^_^
Reviewed By: theMaven [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2004 20:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You're such a tease! But it's gotta be Naraku/Kagome. He's the villain with black hair and red eyes. She's the one with the white sailor shirt with the red bowtie, and the pink jewel is the Shikon no Tama.
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Reviewed By: Sakimatama [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2004 18:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh w0w! that wuz really good! my guess is it wuz Naruku/Kagome, right? well, anywayz, ive never really been open to that pairing, but i must say that after that, i guess i cant help but love it! great job!
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Reviewed By: Nagasaki [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2004 00:23 CST
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was it nar/kag? great story!
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Title: Beautiful
Reviewed By: Violet Sakura [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2004 19:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm a generous reviewer, so I gave you a ten. It was however, a truthful rating. Yur style of writng is so eloquent and it just seems to flow. Sme people are telling you to continue and there's no doubt that said people have no idea what a oneshot is. To continue it wouldn't make it a oneshot anymore, now would it? No. Well, I loved it. Another thisng that I noticed is that these people just dont pay attention. From what was said of the long ebony hair and crimson eyes, it was obviously Naraku. And the red and white clothing clued in the also obvious fact that the other main character was Kikyo. So, if i've guessed correctly, then its a Kikyo/Naraku fic. There's nothing wrong with altrnate parings(except for kag/sess, I just dont like those). Let me say it again. Words cannot describe the beauty and perfection of this piece. You should definitely keep writing. I wouldn't be surprised if you were published someday.
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Reviewed By: $ean Pauly On: January 07, 2004 15:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it! I think it is Sess/Kago
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Reviewed By: RedHerring [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2003 21:36 CST
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What WAS that? I know kagome was there. and i'm guessing Naraku? Because of the whole crimson eyes. God, i hate alternate pairings. and how could you do it with Naraku?! I know some people are all open to the idea of alternate pairings, but Nar/Kag!?!? that's just twisted. Naraku is a sick person, and you can't just pair him with Kago.
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Title: Pairings
Reviewed By: InuGirl13 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2003 12:13 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Was it Nar/Kag? I LOVE alternate pairings but hate not being told who the pairings are *pouts* pleeeaase tell us the pairing?
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Title: ???????
Reviewed By: Sesshoumaru_Lover [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2003 16:31 CST
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THis was great, please continue, i want to know who those two were. LOL
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Title: Iove it!!!
Reviewed By: BC On: December 15, 2003 14:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love Alternate pairings. Update please.
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Reviewed By: AJ On: December 15, 2003 08:53 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ths fic is awesome!! You have to continue!!! Update please...
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