| "No choice" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: Navka On: August 08, 2005 07:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
What a snot fanfic... Poor Teti... And i have never thought that Zaady can play the theatrical performance like that.
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Title: good work
Reviewed By: Fateh On: January 29, 2005 12:27 CST
Comment/Review:
hum,I certainly enjoyed reading it. I really hope to see more of your works here.
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Reviewed By: shadowdove [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2004 10:35 CST
Comment/Review:
That was very nicely written! You looked at Zadei's feelings for Titius at different angles, which made it interesting to read! I hope you keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: gokumum On: October 31, 2004 13:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, I guess you wrote this before you read up till the end of Seimaden, as, of course in the end, things turned out alright for them. I noticed a few misspellings and a betareader never is a bad thing to have... But, anyhow, nice job and hopefully one day you may write some fanfic of their life together.
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