| "Digimon 02: The Strength of Friendship" Reviews/Comments [ 13 ] |
Reviewed By: Dark Angel 666 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2004 09:12 CDT
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NO! U CAN'T END IT AT CHAPTER !! Hurry ADD Please...
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Reviewed By: Dark Angel 666 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2004 23:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey great chapter. All though...you don't have to keep putting someone said and he said...try he spoke, or if they're angry, he spat angrily as he launched himself at the man. That kind of stuff. Try reading unforgivable and the new girl. You might get some ideas. But really great job so far. I have to get off though and get a shower. ANyway...take my advice to heart. It could really help. Update the thrid digimon story with Takoto soon. Please? I'm begging you. THis is for six, seven and eight chapters. Oh yeah...one more thing, you dont have to keep putting he (Veemon) said. Just say he.
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Reviewed By: Dark Angel 666 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2004 17:28 CDT
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Awesume! I Can't wait to read more! YAY! MORE CHAPTERS TO READ!
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Reviewed By: Dark Angel 666 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2004 22:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, this review is for chapter six and under.Okay. Great job, keep up the good work, can't wait to read more.
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Title: GOOO Charmeleon
Reviewed By: Hyperman On: February 13, 2004 10:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
As always, great stories, but once agin yer doin the whole explainin who doin what agin. He (Veemon's) head, back, ect, ect, ect. Not countin of on your writin though. Sorry it took so long to read. Busy with college and if you ever think about usin Betsumon hears the web site agin.(made a mistake last time.) http://ca.geocities.com/digi_josied/ If that doesnt work go to google and type in Renamon. The web site will be on the first few pages. The website has a lot of Digimon in it and their alphabetical order, it also lists their attacks levels and so on, but it does not discribe the attacks. Don't let that stop you though make up what you feel the attack would be like or keep it the way you want it, its your call bro!!! WHAT AM I SAYIN(NO PUN INTENDED) PLEASE PUT BETSUMON IN YOUR NEXT FIC, HIS CHAMPION FORM IS MIKEMON WHO IS A BROWN VERSION OF GATOMON. CLIFF HANGERS ROCK!!!
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Reviewed By: Black Growlmon On: February 11, 2004 15:49 CST
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I´ts really a good story! I like Flamedramon. But why fight Draco Flamedramon not with his full power? Why he let Chaosmyotismon alive, when he had his chance to delete him? Thats sounds very odd. But this is the only thing that disturb me, on this story.
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Title: Great!!!!
Reviewed By: Saelbu [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2004 18:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter! Can't wait for the next.
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Reviewed By: Saelbu [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2004 11:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter, I love this story, update again soon. ^_^
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Reviewed By: Saelbu [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2004 19:47 CST
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This is really interesting, please update soon. ^_^
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Title: Gettin better
Reviewed By: HyperMan On: December 31, 2003 04:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That Wraith of the Dragons attack was awsome and will Titan Flamdramon have an even cooler Mega form. Also, if you do any stories after Ken becomes good (if he becomes good, its your fanfic after all.) will Veemon's new power affect the way Wormmon and Veemon DNA digivolve? Yes have Ken capture Titan Flamedramon and PLEASE use Betsumon as your upcomming stories its a trip to see what he looks like. I found him on. http://ca.geocites.com/digi-josied/digidex Would send E-mails, but still can't find out whats wrong with computer and I'm now HyperMan instead of Mallrat, because someone has swiped my name. Keep up the good work.
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Title: TooKoLL
Reviewed By: Mallrat On: December 28, 2003 01:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is my first rating, so don't take anything i say offensivly. The only problem i really saw was the use of he[Veemon], just use the characters name instead of the "he" thingy. I'm aiso in the process of writing my own fanfic and as soon as i learn how to really use a computer(long story). Post your next story soon.
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Title: me again!
Reviewed By: ShadowGallantmon On: December 17, 2003 15:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
well... i have an idea if you need digimon attacks go to www.kenpage.freehosting.net/custom3/html best site for digi attacks that ive found.
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Reviewed By: ShadowGallantmon On: December 16, 2003 13:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ill be the first to review this fanfic, and might i say that it is a good one. (i only review fanfics that i like) POST MORE SOON!
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