| "Broken Destiny" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: metty On: November 06, 2004 22:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think you have a great imagination for being able to come up with this idea. All you need to work on is your spelling,and grammar. Also could you make this a crossover with Inuyasha and have serena melt sesshoumaru's heart of ice.
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Reviewed By: metty On: November 06, 2004 22:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think you have a great imagination for being able to come up with this idea. All you need to work on is your spelling,and grammar. Also could you make this a crossover with Inuyasha and have serena melt sesshoumaru's heart of ice.
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Reviewed By: chibi Girl On: December 16, 2003 21:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 2 of 10
Overall Rating: 2 of 10 Comment/Review:
you really nead to work on your spelling and righting stile because you can't tell hwo is saying what its really bad! but the idae is good keep practicing and you will get beter! oh and can you make it a sailor moon/DBZ crossover?
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