Reviewed By: prophet04 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2004 17:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 4 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think you need a diferent rating system , cause I couldn't describe what I rate it any better. Don't get me wrong , you have the potential of a best selling author , but I put that story on the very short list where I was amused and disgusted at the same time. BECAUSE I FORGOT THAT FLEA WAS A MAN , AND MAGUS IS ONE OF MY FAVORITE CHARACTERS OF ALL TIME!!!!!! The story style and originality is fantastic. But I might not ever be able to look at magus the same way again(thank you very much!). I'm torn between giving it a 10+ and a -0. I'd have felt better if you would have used frog (now that's comedy). Was I disgusted? HELL YEA!!! Would I read more? I reluctantly say.................yes.
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