| "Sittin' In An Alley" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: Injured Raven On: June 16, 2005 00:45 CDT
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if I where you I would take flames and flame them back if they don't like it the I say scew them! they can just keep there damn oppinions to themselves! assholes great story by the way plz continue ^_^ oh and wnt a way to fend off Joey just use a frying pan seeya *_^
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Reviewed By: Injured Raven On: June 16, 2005 00:42 CDT
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if I where you I would take flames and flame them back if they don't like it the I say sqew them! they can just keep there damn oppinions to themselves! assholes great story by the way plz continue ^_^
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Reviewed By: XxxInukuraXxX [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2004 14:20 CDT
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AHHH!!! IT'S BEEN WHILE SINCE U UPDATED,SO U MUST UPDATE!!!!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!
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Reviewed By: Lady Asia On: January 01, 2004 18:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW!!!!!!!!!!!1 that was a good one. please keep on updating, ~Lady Asia~
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Reviewed By: ran_chan [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2003 01:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 2 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
The idea of Joey being beaten up isn't exactly a new one but this story is carrying it well. The spelling needs a lot of work however and I am not referring to the "Joey-slang" but actually spelling problems. There is a lot punctuation, grammar and spelling problems in the fic and it makes understanding what is going on a little difficult at times. The "Joey-slang" is something I personally find a little annoying when people abbreviate too much on words. In the English dub Joey does talk...with abbreviated words. But not every word and every sentence has to be abbreviated so that may be something to look out for. So far I haven't really noticed you doing it too badly but make sure you don't give into the evil lure of cutting every word with a " ' ". Overall this fic is pretty enjoyable although it is progressing a little fast. Maybe some more detail in the fic would make for a more...richer story. Please keep up the good work! Ran-Chan
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Reviewed By: TechnicalDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2003 22:36 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great story pleaze review
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Reviewed By: FallenAngel7901 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2003 04:24 CST
Comment/Review:
good story, can't wait to read more
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Reviewed By: bakurasgirl too lazy to log in On: December 17, 2003 07:00 CST
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good story. poor joey.
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