| "House of Cards" Reviews/Comments [ 14 ] |
Reviewed By: flowers [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2004 14:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I wish I had four arms so I could give this fic.............. four thumbs up! This is my first yugioh fic that I've EVER read and I'm VERY glad I did!!! I'm an Inuyasha girl myself but I have a liking for Yugioh (and yes, I'm a stinky fangirl, can't get enough of yumi) your grammar is wonderful, your style is flowing and easy to pull me in, the originality is what made me read, I can't say enough about how I love this. BTW I was in the army and homophobia is rampant, but there are a lot of gays now a days and I can proudly say I helped stand up for many of them. I have actually heard about something quite like this in my last unit, unbelievable... Anyways, kudo's to you (I'm not worthy I'm not worthy!!!) WRITE MORE, angst is my cup of tea, it's not a good story w/o it IMO. *wishing you would consider writing an Inu fic...*
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Title: This was really good
Reviewed By: Dark Sanctuary [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2004 22:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a really great story, cause it dealt with real actual uses of prejudice. I mean when people read this they will see just how sick some people can be,in there thoughts and actions. It was so live like and that is what makes a story good I think, to forget that these are just characters and to believe that they are "real". Which in my eyes they are. Anyway loved it, cant wait till your next one.
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Reviewed By: Rowan Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2004 11:58 CST
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This is a really good fic, normally I don't read angst, and I'm reading this one, proving how good it is! Please continue as soon as possible!
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Reviewed By: Me On: February 21, 2004 00:56 CST
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grr...My email says there's another review in here by 'Fallin Dark Angel' maybe if I post it will show up, it worked last time.
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Reviewed By: Fallin Dark Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2004 00:44 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Keep goin *starts chantin* Write write write *creating a beat gets a luighter and waves it back and forth still chanting* Write write write (friend: she may be at that for a while just continue soon please shes really startin to crack she dosnt have patience as sh e says screw virtue and moral im doin what i want so please write soon) *she still chantin but now she is stomping and pacing still has lighting also glarin*
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Reviewed By: Mimiheart9 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2004 10:24 CST
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just testing something, want to see if I can get the last review to show up...
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Reviewed By: 3eyefiregirl On: February 14, 2004 11:08 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey this is great! I really like it keep going!!
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Reviewed By: Sheamaru-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2004 14:00 CST
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hey great, really sad, tell your daughter a reviwer says high and great comment!
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Reviewed By: kristen89 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2004 19:44 CST
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aww poor yugi! I feel so bad for him! Will the bad guys be put into jail? Will Yugi lose it on the stand? Plese continue!
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Title: Please Continue
Reviewed By: Dark Sanctuary [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2004 17:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow this is really getting good,please continue.
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Title: Yami no *Rose*
Reviewed By: Yami no Rose [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2004 21:43 CST
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great story so far, please please please write more though
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Reviewed By: Dark Sanctuary [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2004 02:38 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Interesting fic, kinda sad for Yugi though.
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Reviewed By: Tamlin On: December 21, 2003 12:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is really terrific! I really like how people are there for Yugi, it keeps to the feel of the series' theme of friends pulling you through, but you take it to a new level. I can't wait for the next installment.
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Reviewed By: 1st Reviewer On: December 19, 2003 15:30 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is fantastic. Please continue and yes, I, personaly, would love for it to be y/yy yaoi, but that's just me. However, maybe since I'm your first mediaminer reviewer you can do that just for meeee :D pweassssse. J'adore cette roman..(french for: I love this story) please continue.
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