Reviewed By: takeruHikari [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2004 05:37 CDT
Comment/Review:
Great job so far!!! It's good. I can't wait for the rest of the chapters. Please continue. Anyway good job twisting the story line. Especaily Hikari's reaction to T.K disapearing. Other than the fact that I would like the next chapter to be longer. (Consider it a request)I think it's perfect!
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