| "Innocent Seduction" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Reviewed By: NERVSGC [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2007 14:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This a good story and you should keep going with it. Update soon.
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Title: Next Update
Reviewed By: Laser Crusader [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2007 23:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So exactly when do you plan to update Innocent Seduction again. I am curious on exactly what else you plan to do with this story.
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Reviewed By: xanderblaze On: February 28, 2007 23:52 CST
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great story. post more soon. one question though. is toji cheating on hikari. add a nice dynamicby having hikari finds out andin retaliation she wants shinji to put a bun in her oven.
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Reviewed By: Lord_Raa [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2006 07:43 CST
Comment/Review:
I approve of this fic :P
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Title: Wuhuu
Reviewed By: EVA-09 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2006 17:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I never expected to see chapter 2 on this one and this good I might add. I hope there will be chapter 3.
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Reviewed By: CASAO On: January 22, 2004 06:25 CST
Comment/Review:
Wow, froop actually writes stories? How can you managed that without fwapping? Anyway, good story. Congrats on the kickass-ness of it. Write more
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Reviewed By: Ecchi Ryu On: January 13, 2004 22:46 CST
Comment/Review:
WOW!, this is the best eva-lemon i've ever read, keep on writting
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Reviewed By: no name On: December 19, 2003 12:27 CST
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i liked this keep on writing!
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Reviewed By: WarpWizard [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2003 17:21 CST
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*Time for some revenge* Hawt! I came. ;)
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