| "Caught In The Act" Reviews/Comments [ 25 ] |
Title: Sexy
Reviewed By: EVA-09 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2006 23:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. I never thought that Asuka would have the nerve to let her be fucked to death like that. You do a good job. And Rei was describted in sexy way. I loved it.
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Title: Damn...
Reviewed By: forechunkukee [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2005 00:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dude...wow...just...WOW. Sonfoabiscuit, that was one of the best EVA lemons I've read. No joke. The only other ones I enjoyed this much were So Happy Together, and Payback (nice...very nice). This fic was amazingly well written out (Oi...was that proper English?). The way you move Asuka from reluctant, to lusty, to downright nymphomaniacal was most excellant. The lemon scene as a whole was seriously awesome. I noticed a slight similarity between the style used here and in Payback. I'm not imagining things am I? This is some serious good (and hott). I have only one complaint here, everything else was just about damn near perfect: You left a teaser. A tempting teaser. And you didn't carry it out? Major ouch, lol! Well, you did say it was only a possibilty, but hey, I can dream can't I? Awesome job, keep it up and keep 'em wanting more! d('')b
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Reviewed By: udonneedtoknow On: June 12, 2005 19:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*drooling*..pant pant...more more........another one with misato in it!!! lol, seriously, great job man
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Reviewed By: Captain Spadaro On: June 02, 2005 10:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
For the love of God, please continue this!
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Title: lord of panties
Reviewed By: Darkarch On: March 10, 2005 16:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
sweeeeeeet. Lovin it dude. please, for the love of all that is holy, continue this story!
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Title: Caught In The Act
Reviewed By: lightsaber On: September 01, 2004 10:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great story,you really should write a sequel or two
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Reviewed By: third_impact On: July 18, 2004 15:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
one of the best lemons of any anime i've ever read. a continuation would be awesome.
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Reviewed By: Oldwolf [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2004 10:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very nicely done. This is a story I could lose myself in. You write very beautifully.
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Reviewed By: Evafan4eva On: May 30, 2004 23:36 CDT
Comment/Review:
Good story. Nice how you focus more on the emotions than just on the sex. The pilots all seemed to have a connection in the series, a shame the writers didn't make them have some love during the series.
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Title: Good
Reviewed By: volostheguardian [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2004 14:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dear Mr.Warpwizard, I have enjoyed your story very much. Your thoughts in the story focused more around the elements of the sex, not the actual sex. This climaxed(no pun intended) into an excellent lemon I will love always. Sincerly, volostheguardian
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Reviewed By: Debz On: January 07, 2004 13:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow....that was....intense!! Great NGE lemon...really really good!! You should really do the sequel it looks very interesting ^_~ hehe! Lotsa Luv Debz xxx
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Reviewed By: Spectre97 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2004 21:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is one of the best I've ever read. I think u should go with your continuation. It would be quit an interesting read.
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Reviewed By: Jasio On: January 02, 2004 12:40 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Wow. Great lemon, one of the nicest I have seen. Other readers are asking you to continue this story, but in my opinion it should be rather left as a one-shot. Write lots of other lemons, instead :-)
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Reviewed By: Dark Golo On: December 30, 2003 09:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
In my opinion your best lemon for the moment. Please continue it.
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Reviewed By: matt713 On: December 26, 2003 08:51 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
good god that was hot!! you have to continue this it fucking rocked. One of the best NGE fics i've read. I'll start looking for the next part I really hope you write it.
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Reviewed By: goki On: December 25, 2003 01:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GAWD! Now this is what I'm talking about!! Please...You HAVE to continue this! I wanna more Asuka/Shinji/Rei action! And it would be interesting to see Misato in on the action as well.
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Reviewed By: lemon lover On: December 22, 2003 17:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
if you dont continue this..... *gets evil ideas*
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Reviewed By: root@hell On: December 21, 2003 16:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
One of the best nge-lemons, heck one of the best lemons I've ever read. Keep up the good work, and PLEASE continue this story
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Title: caught in the act
Reviewed By: Priest [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2003 06:31 CST
Comment/Review:
as per usual this is a ve3ry good story, and if/when you deside to continue it i will be waighting Ja-ne =(^_^)=
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Reviewed By: Arioc On: December 17, 2003 22:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent work! Keep it up, and please write that continuation!
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Reviewed By: Kail Blade [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2003 03:08 CST
Comment/Review:
I liked it. I cant explain why I like this chapter, but I can explain why I would like the possible next chapter. I like Shinji/Misato stories cause its kinda funny how she does the whole 'He's too young and Im his guardian' thing, so I will probably like the next chapter (If there is one) better then this one.
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Reviewed By: hloi On: December 17, 2003 01:52 CST
Comment/Review:
Please continue.
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Reviewed By: dennisud2015 On: December 16, 2003 23:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What can I say about a story that made my fantasy come true. Not only in the gratification of seeing the love between the three pilots, but the caring wach had for each other. You Damn well better continue this! Now only if Touji & Hikari can get a clue maybe adding kensuke to that would make it a Hikari sandwich in a future eppy! dennisud ;-)
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Reviewed By: YamiYaiba [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2003 22:56 CST
Comment/Review:
Nice. Best left as a one-shot though (not that I don't want to see more ^_^ )
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Reviewed By: Evanhellion On: December 16, 2003 22:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
For a PWP, you still make it shine. Your use of metaphor and simile are inspirational. Keep up the good work.
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