| "Desire" Reviews/Comments [ 13 ] |
Reviewed By: Ellie On: February 10, 2005 14:58 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. It took me a while to get used to your writing style, but now I'm hooked. The twelve pillars idea is interesting and pretty new... I don't think I've ever read a RK story like this before, and I mean that as a great compliment! ;) I also enjoy reading your quotes, which seem *wonderfully* appropriate to the story. It's made me want to look up all those poem references... Are you Italian?
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Reviewed By: De Lazy Lime [MediaMiner Member] On: October 05, 2004 16:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I must say that I am quite enthraled by your fanfic. It is very stimulating.... And now I digress and show the fanfic-loving-girl that I am. Please write more!! I LOVE IT!!
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Title: like wow!
Reviewed By: fudge On: September 26, 2004 13:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just can't beleive how good this story is I hope you update, really really really soon though it seems like you have stopped for some reason but if you would please keep writing this story I will love you forever. Well if you don't I'll understand but just let me inform you that the story so far is really amazing! keep up the good work karen
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Title: Fanfic
Reviewed By: Bookkbaby84 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2004 02:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update soon! I love this fanfic, it's so awesome! You were so creative with the legends, and the Pillars, great job! Please please please update soon- don't leave me hanging! (This will be Kaoru/Kenshin, right?)
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Title: Indeed, that was not for kids. XD
Reviewed By: Battousais gal[not logged on] On: June 07, 2004 18:06 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was...interesting. So, it was obvious that Kaoru was going to be the amethyst...but the circumstances were interesting. Great job! Hmmm... I'm getting confused...Kenshin's eyes were gold? And Kaoru disappeared in a cloud of gold dust...? Ack! I don't even know what I'm talking about anymore! >>; Would you mind explaining that part? *cough* So confused*cough* XD Ja ne! Tanya
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Title: WAI! Another chapter!!!
Reviewed By: Battousais gal[not logged on] On: May 02, 2004 23:06 CDT
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Hehe.. it's been a while, but most definately worth the wait! I'm glad to see that you've updated! I have to say that I'm very surprised that you do not have more reviews... some people are just too lazy... gah! I'm glad I'm not one of those people, I know what it is like to not have many reviews... T.T and I'm feeling so uninspired to write more of my story. I've turned to an original character that I'll be putting into Inuyasha, though I do not know when I'll be able to work on it, I'm just too busy... Well... I hope that your next update comes soon! Ja ne! Tanya
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Reviewed By: sword of souls On: March 19, 2004 13:50 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
i am kinda confused about this story but next to that it's decent
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Reviewed By: Sofa-Chan On: March 18, 2004 14:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hehe...Well then....Hehe.... Sofa-Chan
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Reviewed By: Brukaoru (not logged in) On: March 18, 2004 07:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent, so this is what we missed on fanfiction.net? ^^ If you are going to make a mailing list, please let me be apart of it! I absolutely love your story! Good luck on your finals!
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Title: update!
Reviewed By: enchantress of the night On: February 14, 2004 05:03 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hi! pls update your fic. i like your story...
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Reviewed By: Lady Nightshade [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2004 19:28 CST
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This is a very good story I can't wait to see what you add next! Also can't wait to see who the other towers are.
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Title: I didn't wanna log in!
Reviewed By: Battousais gal[not logged in] On: December 21, 2003 11:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*sticks hand up, waving it like the maniac she is* I will beta read for you!!!!!!!!!!! I'll give my e-mail here: tanya_langston@hotmail.com send it there!!!!! and put the subject to 'beta reader' or something to do with it, because I have a tendancy of deleting any junk mail I have! Perhaps you could find some time to read my story 'Memories Forgotten' (not beta reading though, I've got one already) and leave a review!!!! ^^ Again, this story is very deep and interesting! I can't wait to beta read for you if you don't have anyone yet!!!!!!! ^^ Your reviewer: Tanya /better known as/ Battousais gal Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year!!!!!!
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Title: Deep, real deep...
Reviewed By: Battousais gal [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2003 23:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whoa! *eyes VERY wide* *checks for other reviews* I'm the first reviewer huh? Well, in that case............. WAI, WAI, WAI, WAI, WAI!!!!!!! I really love this fic, which is why I'm putting either you, or this story on my favs list! KEEP ON GOING!!!!! I have to say, that at first it confused me. The twelve pillars rung a small bell... probably only because I have watched a .hack//sign episode called 'Party' where the 'Book of Revelations' was mentioned along with the 12 stones that were to be the bases(or supports) for the pillars. WOW! I'm still dazed after reading this! But it is a good type of 'dazedness', I can assure you of that, that I can. ARH! Been slipping into Japanese(not even my native language!) and the dubbed versions for RK. You know that you are tired and have watched too much RK when..... yeah, you get the picture.... I hope! ^~^ UPDATE, UPDATE! You're first Reviewer, Tanya ^~^
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