| "through the black hole" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: migele [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2005 03:22 CST
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sorry but EVAs are about 60-70 meters tall, astevalis about 10 maximum, considering the AT field and that EVA-01 stood ground when the third angel detonated I think It's way to improbable. the entry plug is about as log as an aestevalis. try rewriting the chapter, the idea might have potential. migi
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Title: Well if your so perfect
Reviewed By: razile [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2004 13:33 CST
Comment/Review:
well if your so good at things like this then you can be my BETA reader, just send it to my e-mail once you've riped it apart, show me what I done wrong, smartass
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Reviewed By: Your 2nd Grade English Teacher On: January 17, 2004 01:13 CST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Comment/Review:
Do not have monkeys type your story, or you will end up with 10,000 typos.
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