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| "Beware the Plots of Sisters" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Title: Wow
Reviewed By: aoshi4misao [MediaMiner Member] On: December 25, 2004 00:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, that was the first Hiei/Kuwabara that I've ever read, especially one with Yukina too. I normally avoid any of the combinations of those three since they are rarely well written. But yours was amazingly well written and I enjoyed it alot. Thank you for this wonderful fic. Keep up the good work.
[ Request Review Removal ] | Title: Wonderful
Reviewed By: Quadrono Leader [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2003 10:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Pure Pleasure. This is what I'd gladly call reading this fic. I've recently become on of the masses who love Yu Yu Hakusho fanfics and I have to say I've read a lot of them. Seeing as how Kuwabara and Yukina is my favorite couple, and Hiei comes in a close second as a favorite character, there was no way I'd be able to pass this story up. I printed it immediately and took it to bed with me. I couldn't put it down. I had to read, then re read it. I went to sleep with it, then had to read it before I left work as well. It's been a long time since a piece of fiction has captured my attention like that. It's even rarer for YYH fanfiction writers to write Kuwabara without bashing the poor guy, not to mention writing him in character. You've managed to nail him, and the others on the head. I'm rambling…I guess what I'm trying to say is that I think this is a wonderful story, a wonderful subject and I would love for you to write more to it. Please, please, PLEASE don't let this be a one parter. Something this wonderful deserves to be an ongoing series. Or at the very least, have more stories written about the Trio perhaps? I think it would be cute to see children or maybe even Yukina getting her turn with the big stud. Thanks for writing that most enjoyable piece for fanfiction. Kenya
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