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Reviewed By: LainoftheAzureSky (Lain of the Azure Sky, just not logged in) On: August 10, 2004 20:49 CDT
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damn, I never would have found this fic if it hadn't so happened that you are on my 'favorite authors' list. It's extremely well done, and I hope that you continue updating 'all' your stories until they're completed. Each one has an interesting facet of reality, and intrigue me to keep on reading. Update soon please ^_^
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Reviewed By: black beauty On: March 17, 2004 17:15 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Update soon I can't wait to read more of this fic. Keep up the great job.
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Reviewed By: black beauty On: February 12, 2004 19:52 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I'm glad that you made it clear that this fic will be a 1x2x1 fic. I hope that despite of all the angst it will have a happy ending. Keep up the good job and update soon.
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Reviewed By: Yira On: January 17, 2004 03:14 CST
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Okay you've got me hooked now. *grins* It's well written and your jokes are very amusing. I love the Sith siblings. *grins* They're great minor characters. The prank on Fei was absolutely priceless. You write Duo extremely well. Though, for some odd reason I can't imagine Heero as a cop *frowns* I can tell this is going to be a very long fic. Not too worried about that though *grins* I'll enjoy the ride.
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Reviewed By: black beauty On: January 05, 2004 14:27 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I like this fic, but one thing i'm curious about is whether this will end up being a Heero and Relena fic, or if Duo's feelings will be returned? The emotions and the way it switches, plus Heero hidding those paintings... it makes me wonder. Anyways keep up the good job and update soon.
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Reviewed By: NeNa [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2004 14:18 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was Hilarious! Oh poor Wufei... hehehe... very funny indeed! I love this fic. It's very sweet and charming. I hope the fitting for Duo goes alright. Anyway, you really have to continue this Fic its great! keep up the great work and I can't wait until the next chapter! ~*+NeNa+*~
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Title: NeNaTiEnEtUmBaO4@aol.com
Reviewed By: Me, Myself, and I On: December 26, 2003 15:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh! I Love it already! It is beautiflly written. I love the detail that you put into it. The detail makes this fic more realistic. Also the details crate a very clear picture of what you are discribing. It's great! The part about the puppy was Adorable!!! It's very true though because puppies are like that, very energetic, happy, and friendly! I suggest that you continue this fic because I know that it'll be great! Keep up the wonderful work and I can't wait until the next chapter! ~*+NeNa+*~
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Title: Ch 2
Reviewed By: mookienh [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2003 10:11 CST
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Oooh, I just LOVED the end of the chapter. Had a sinking feeling in MY stomach as I read it to go along with Heero's! Duo's prank on Trowa and Quatre was funny, but of special note was the description of the two of them as they slept together. Loved Quatre's incoherent mumblings. So, is "doughnut fish" the product of a dream or am I missing what he was TRYING to say? Not that it matters, it made me laugh at the idea. I've heard some very odd dream-state ramblings, so it is certainly believable either way! I really like the way you write their feelings. I am a very big fan of inner emotions being revealed, especially when it's a slow and painful reckoning.
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Title: Ch 1
Reviewed By: MookieNH [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2003 04:44 CST
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Nice descriptive style, with a good set up for the characters. The physical changes in them are believable, and their meeting dripped with potential. Nice bombshell of Heero's.
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Title: halfwayblue@hotmail.com
Reviewed By: Nani On: December 18, 2003 00:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nooo. Keep going, this is wonderful! After days of slogging through very bad fanfiction, I deserve a well written continuation. Scratch that, an amazing continuation. You're writing is... some of the best I've ever read. And, tell me you, I've been around the Gundam Wing block a time or two. Or three. Or four. Anyway, please continue! I'm watching this one.
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Title: halfwayblue@hotmail.com
Reviewed By: Nani On: December 18, 2003 00:33 CST
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Nooo. Keep going, this is wonderful! After days of slogging through very bad fanfiction, I deserve a well written continuation. Scratch that, an amazing continuation. You're writing is... some of the best I've ever read. And, tell me you, I've been around the Gundam Wing block a time or two. Or three. Or four. Anyway, please continue! I'm watching this one.
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