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Reviewed By: evalhanne [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2006 15:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is an awesome story so far. I can't wait to see more. The story is riveting and complex.
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Title: 'caught up (^_^)
Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2006 15:11 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
not to steal a line from Usher's song, but I am ... in this story and on Chap 16!! Hoooray! Now this is a beautifully written drama and I was so disappoint in not having anything more to read. Again I give high fives, or tens in your skill with words and your protrayal of the characters.. the story period. It's done well and I wonder if I could borrow your muse and you translate and put to paper the stories reeking havoc in my head. *smiles* No the story, that last chapter did it for me. Heero went out with one thought in mind, 'cheer Duo up' not know that his heart was telling him that he loved him and drove his body toward all those meaningful flowers. *snickers* If only heero's mind would get the hint and not cause him to have some sort of emotional relapse to the insanity that drove him to try to kill himself while holding Duo's picture. Heero's super fearful of the paintings he did, but if they are depicting who I think they are depicting then 'a picture is worth a thousand words' as the saying goes and maybe Duo seeing them wouldn't be so bad. Unless they show heero killing or maming him in super horrorific ways thennn~ I would understand why i wouldn't want my best friend to see that either. Heero is so much more alive with Duo! gah, and my mental image of the hug they gave each other when they realized who they were seeing will forever stay with me. Did Heero turn to Relena for comfort and denied who he really wanted with the thought that he'd never find him? Did he try to look? He knew about Hilde, Howard... he could have tried to find him through them. And then there's the issue of him not knowing that Duo prefers men and the fear of rejection that he may have been dealing with and there was his repressed emotions that he shows so easily now... sorry I kind of wrote out what i was trying to piece together, which basically amouts to - this story is complex and I love it! Sooo this baby business... Duo has a kid?! or not...hmm, you give us these little morsels of the story within the story and gooosh it's a pain to wait but well worth it! Spring break is coming up soon for ya, enjoy it and update as soon as you can.
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Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2006 10:41 CST
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Hey Kai! sorry to shorten your name but wow I really didn't know what i was missing with this story of yours besides the heartache of waiting for an update. Wow... is all I can say and again, this, as in any of your other stories, has the same wonderful/powerful descripts that bring the world they live in and ours closer together. I feel like I'm repeating myself when I say you make it real, tangible...you MAKE them real for us. You do what you do well...don't be getting a big head now... And I've fallen hard for this baby since the third chapter. haha, i wanted to say the first but then it would sound so cliched... but I'm a serious reader...if that makes any sense and when I read a story and can feel it...gosh I just don't know what to say so this is coming out like gibberish and i just hope it makes sense, but basically this is a pretty damn good story! *SMILE* There was an odd feel from Duo when he got to see his green room with a swing when he tensed at the presence at his bedroom door... it makes me wonder what happen with the sweepers. *cries* I'm only at chapt5 and rapidly moving up, but i have to go to work now. I'm glad your muze and you didn't let this story go. *hugs you* can't thank you enough for sharing your love of GW and your talent. Keep writing and good luck with school.
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Reviewed By: chantygal [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2006 18:09 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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Glad to see a new chap , for sure. Loved it. Love this story in general. The only hitch I can see now is i'm conused my all this babble about heero's condition and it's relation to Duo, cause at one point i think it's a sexual thing then the next it's like mental thing. Please spill the beans on that aspect for me plz and soon. Can't wait for another chapter!!!Keep writing, keep updating.
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Reviewed By: chantygal [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2005 13:07 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Loving the storyline so far. Great descriptive work. Can't wait for the next chapter!! Keep writing ,Keep updating.
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Reviewed By: kourutusunie [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2005 07:41 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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>.> I could have sworn I saw this chapter before... *pout* Next time you update can there be a large chapter?
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: WickedGame [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2005 13:08 CST
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you know, this story moves very slowly, but it is very rich with detail. i have a couple of suspicions about what is going on in this story, but i am willing to wait. but it seems as if this whole story is going to revolve around their trip. it has been a lot of chapters, and they are still on the same day, and with you taking so long to update chapters, i have a fear this will be like a ton of other fics i have read where the authors undertake a long and winding story, and then do not finish it. it leave the readers wanting more and not knowing if they are going to get it. i would be willing to discuss my suspicions with anyone who reads this review too.
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Reviewed By: Alaina-chan On: September 04, 2005 23:11 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm lovin this fic. Do I see an update in the near future? Please? I can't wait!!!
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Reviewed By: black beauty On: July 01, 2005 08:34 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Update soon! Please don't take too long to update. I want to know the contents of Heero's paintings and Relena's secret. The faster sooner you post a new chapter (that I have to like) the sooner I can post a review. See I am doing my part, start working on yours!
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Title: ch 11
Reviewed By: Justkat again.^_^ On: April 24, 2005 02:55 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Another great chapter. That Mayfield really is one creepy character! And the Relena situation is very intriguing. My heart aches for Duo though. And I guess his situaation can only get worse now that Relena's heading home. Oh dear!
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Title: ch 10
Reviewed By: justkat [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2005 06:19 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yaayy...you wrote more!!! Thanks for saving the guys so neatly; except that now poor Duo has to live with the image of the belt, and all those rippling muscles. As do I. Damn! But what a way to go... ^__^
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Title: ch 9
Reviewed By: justkat [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2005 06:00 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*Great* story. Wonderful, like all your stories. Poor Duo! I feel so sorry for him...all the sunshine is disappearing out of his world. Smelling perfume in Heero's bedroom was a very poignant moment, and something that I don't like to think about. I liked Precious a lot. An interesting character, although I guess we won't see much more of him. And what a cliffhanger of a chapter ending! I will be looking forward to the next bit very much. ^_^
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Title: ch 9
Reviewed By: justkat [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2005 02:51 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*Great* story. Wonderful, like all your stories. Poor Duo! I feel so sorry for him...all the sunshine is disappearing out of his world. Smelling perfume in Heero's bedroom was a very poignant moment, and something that I don't like to think about. I liked Precious a lot. An interesting character, although I guess we won't see much more of him. And what a cliffhanger of a chapter ending! I will be looking forward to the next bit very much. ^_^
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Reviewed By: black beauty On: August 10, 2004 20:56 CDT
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WOW! An update! It's been nearly 6 months since your last update. Every chapter is very descriptive and I like that very much, but I'm still hoping that the plot will develop at a much faster pace. Update soon and keep up the good job.
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Reviewed By: black beauty On: August 10, 2004 20:55 CDT
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WOW! An update! It's been nearly 6 months since your last update. Every chapter is very descriptive and I like that very much, but I'm still hoping that the plot will develop at a much faster pace. Update soon and keep up the good job.
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