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Title: Chapter 8- Patrial- Review
Reviewed By: RedHerring [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2004 23:08 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, that was a good partial chapter. In fact, I think it could stand alone and you could just write a part four. You are making me itch with anticipation to see who the other evil dude is. So forgive me for being the petulent little child I am when I say: Please update soon!!! I wanna know what happens!!! Anyways, good update. Ttyl!
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Title: delightful
Reviewed By: youkai_tsuki [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2004 14:43 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ahh what a refreshing change of pace. I must say, I passed your story by for fear it was another boring fic wrote by someone who only thought they could write. I do like being proven wrong. You are indeed a talented writer with a great imagination. Everyone is in character,you chapter are long, you have detail and emotions and a plot. I truly enjoyed it. I will be adding you to my favorite list. Please feel honored, very few make it there. Keep up the good work and I will keep reviewing. Good job and happy writing. youkai tsuki
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Title: Chapter 8- That Awful Teaser- Review
Reviewed By: RedHerring [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2004 19:12 CST
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You are evil, like that. I see that The story has been updated in my inbox and I get all exited, and then it's a TEASER! *sigh* You're just building up the anticipation and It'll be so cool when I finally get to read about the wish!! OOOH!! Please hurry! ^___^
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Reviewed By: wufeicustom [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2004 16:44 CST
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this is an incredible story and i really hope that i get to read the end and please don't make Kagome lose Inu-yasha
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Reviewed By: witchygoddess10 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2004 03:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very original;how are you going to end it? Dang it,I wish I was good as all of you at writing this kind of stuff(I'm just a measly artist in my spare time when I'm not working).Please continue. Sincerely,LilithQueen
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Reviewed By: Amethyst (not in) On: January 13, 2004 17:45 CST
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=D (has nothing more to say)
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Reviewed By: RedHerring [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2004 16:00 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*gasp* Oh no! a new evil guy? I wonder what his connection with Kagome is, and does it have anything to do with the wish? That dream was ominous too, I hope you aren't going to be doing some really sad ending where the effect of the wish finally wears off and they all fade away. Or dissolve. That would be exually sad; and the whole thing about being together in is romantic and all, but I much prefer them to be alive. Anyways, great chapter, as always, and I really hope that your intertet doesn't block out Mediaminer. Please update soon!!! ^____^
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Reviewed By: Laura-chan (still too lazy to login) On: January 13, 2004 15:08 CST
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Well, well, this chapter was really interesting... I can't wait to read about everyone's reaction when they are going to see Naraku.... this is going to be funny ^_~ well, what can I say more? keep writing and update a.s.a.p.!
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Reviewed By: Relix On: January 12, 2004 04:11 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm putting this on my top list.
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Reviewed By: Airen [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2004 01:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi there. I just stumbled onto this fic tonight, and let me tell you, I read a few paragraphs and was immediately hooked. After wading through tons of crappy fanfics, I finally found one that was well-written. First of all, you can spell. I love you for that. Not many writers can spell around here, sadly. Your grammar is excellent and you have a very nice writing style. Also, this fic is pretty creative and revolves around a very original concept. It seems that most fanwriters don't focus on Shikon no Tama very much - just on the characters. I'm pleased that your plot seems pretty fleshed out. The lemon was also well-done, I think. Don't get me wrong, I'm not one of those weirdos who reads fics just for the lemon content, heh. Some things, though. First, like RedHerring said, five hundred years is an insanely long time. One would think the characters would have changed greatly over time. At least I think they would show signs of heightened maturity - especially Inuyasha himself. Second...does Kagome and Souta's mother know that they've been hanging out at Sesshoumaru's for several days? Maybe I accidentally skipped something, but I just wondered, heh. Mrs. Higurashi seems super anal-retentive now...she might notice if her kids were gone for an extended period of time. Er, sorry about all my nitpickings. Ummm...other than that, your story's really good. I'm so happy I finally found something worth reading in this section. I'm adding you to my favorites, and I hope you update soon. Keep up the good work! ;)
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Reviewed By: Van Stolin [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2003 21:59 CST
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I have to say one thing, you should put a warning that there is a lemon on a chapter, the fic does say hentai, but it would help to know which chapters would have it. Oh and some other stuff. I think it is safe to say you haven't seen much of Inuyasha. Well, I will have to tell you if you want to know that Naraku has a new body and it might make the story more interesting to use it. I could try to find a picture of it for you, if you want. You also might want to look for screens on the second Inuyasha movie for a surprise.
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Title: awesome job
Reviewed By: inugirl [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2003 20:05 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ooh i love your story so much. please update soon! great job! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Laura-chan (too lazy to login) On: December 28, 2003 05:27 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Ehy, that was really great! I loved the lemon:it was hot, passionate and loving ^_~ just the way I like it ;) keep writing!
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Title: Chaoter 6 Review
Reviewed By: RedHerring [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2003 17:41 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Alright! Great going with the chapter, and the lemon. lol. *painfully unsticks face from scrunched-up 'sour' expression* Please update soon! ^~^
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Reviewed By: Amethyst (ish lazi dunt wanna sign in) On: December 27, 2003 17:08 CST
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So now they FINALLY make passionate love . . . ^^ It's all good.
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