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Title: update please
Reviewed By: cutiepieusagi On: March 28, 2005 01:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
nooooooooooooooooooo. Why leave us hangin like that? please update this story. I really want to know what her wish is.
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Title: Paradox
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2005 22:17 CST
Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: Inu angel [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2004 12:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent creative work.Very original.Haven't seen work done this good in a long time!
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Title: wufeicustom
Reviewed By: wufeicustom [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2004 20:01 CST
Comment/Review:
WWWWHHHHHHHHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAATTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT you still didn't tell us her wish arg good lord woman how long are you gona make us wait aaaaaahhhhhhhhh i hate waiting phooooey anyway this is a very deep story i really like the way you throw plot twists in all the time its very very good the only thing i really hope you don't do is make Kagome fall in love with Naraku please don't do that i don't think i could live with it but i will still read you storys well hope you next chap is just as good and that you tell us what her wish was lol anyway till next time ttfn
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Title: wufeicustom
Reviewed By: wufeicustom [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2004 14:01 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well this has taken a rather interesting turn, I mean Kagome having an evil side? However I still loved reading the second half, your attention to detail is very good. I look forward to reading more.
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Title: Chapter *- the finished one- Review
Reviewed By: RedHerring [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2004 17:45 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ohhh, *dances fromfoot to foot* you love making me fidget with anticipation, don't you? You're simply amazing when you come up with all of these plot twists. Some people use the whole 'Miko's have to be a maiden' thing in their stories, so maybe the fact that Kagome is no lover a maiden (wink, wink, I still love the lemon) has something to do with her disappearing Miko powers? Or maybe it's that new evil guy that you never want to tell us about! I bet it's Kohaku.... totally unexpected and unless you made up a new character, then I don't know what to expect. But that's what good writers do: they keep us readers on our toes ^____^ Please update soon!! ^____^ Kudos!
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Reviewed By: wufeicustom [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2004 15:15 CST
Comment/Review:
man this is soooo good i re-read the whole thing just now in one sitting so i could figure out what was going on all the way and it is very very good can't wait for ur next update
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Reviewed By: Laura-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2004 07:40 CST
Comment/Review:
this chapter is my favorite for now! It was just too fun to read about Inuyasha being sat again =) then, I feel a bit bad for Kouga, but Inu and Kag are meant to be.... Keep writing! ^^V
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Title: Chapter 8- Patrial- Review
Reviewed By: RedHerring [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2004 23:08 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, that was a good partial chapter. In fact, I think it could stand alone and you could just write a part four. You are making me itch with anticipation to see who the other evil dude is. So forgive me for being the petulent little child I am when I say: Please update soon!!! I wanna know what happens!!! Anyways, good update. Ttyl!
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Title: delightful
Reviewed By: youkai_tsuki [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2004 14:43 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ahh what a refreshing change of pace. I must say, I passed your story by for fear it was another boring fic wrote by someone who only thought they could write. I do like being proven wrong. You are indeed a talented writer with a great imagination. Everyone is in character,you chapter are long, you have detail and emotions and a plot. I truly enjoyed it. I will be adding you to my favorite list. Please feel honored, very few make it there. Keep up the good work and I will keep reviewing. Good job and happy writing. youkai tsuki
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Title: Chapter 8- That Awful Teaser- Review
Reviewed By: RedHerring [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2004 19:12 CST
Comment/Review:
You are evil, like that. I see that The story has been updated in my inbox and I get all exited, and then it's a TEASER! *sigh* You're just building up the anticipation and It'll be so cool when I finally get to read about the wish!! OOOH!! Please hurry! ^___^
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Reviewed By: wufeicustom [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2004 16:44 CST
Comment/Review:
this is an incredible story and i really hope that i get to read the end and please don't make Kagome lose Inu-yasha
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Reviewed By: witchygoddess10 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2004 03:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very original;how are you going to end it? Dang it,I wish I was good as all of you at writing this kind of stuff(I'm just a measly artist in my spare time when I'm not working).Please continue. Sincerely,LilithQueen
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Reviewed By: Amethyst (not in) On: January 13, 2004 17:45 CST
Comment/Review:
=D (has nothing more to say)
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Reviewed By: RedHerring [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2004 16:00 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*gasp* Oh no! a new evil guy? I wonder what his connection with Kagome is, and does it have anything to do with the wish? That dream was ominous too, I hope you aren't going to be doing some really sad ending where the effect of the wish finally wears off and they all fade away. Or dissolve. That would be exually sad; and the whole thing about being together in is romantic and all, but I much prefer them to be alive. Anyways, great chapter, as always, and I really hope that your intertet doesn't block out Mediaminer. Please update soon!!! ^____^
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