| "Be Here in the Morning" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] |
Title: (gasp)
Reviewed By: Lil bishi hunter [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2005 14:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW...O_O... please tell me that you are going to update...I WANT YOU TO!!!! It wass great! You are doing a good job! Now update while I go to your website and cheak this out!
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Reviewed By: gorillazgal86 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2004 21:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
OOOooo. This has a really interesting start. I like how you've set it at the End of Eva and the comparisons at the end of the chapter with the hard, cold beach with asuka to the something soft and warm. And your last line, wonderful way to leave it! I can't wait for the next chapter of this! This looks like it's gonna be awesome and I'm looking foward to what you've got in store. Yay for decent Kaworu/Shinji!!!
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