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| "Have A Merry Little Christmas" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: Obsessed Inuyasha Fan On: June 16, 2004 17:50 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
pretty good begining. i think thats cute how kagome went to help him and was all cutsie/tough, making him smirk. and hes all stuttering because nobodys ever really been that nice to him or anything. i think you should end up having kagome invite inuyasha to come over to her house for christmas....... she could be like..'if you're..um.. not too busy with your own family..i was thinking..maybe you'd like to hang out with me at my house. i mean we always have extra food and i'm sure my family wouldn't mind' then inuyasha would chuckle lightly at her embarrasment and smile saying 'sure. that'd be nice. my family dosent do much so as long as your sure..' 'good!' ...something like that.. (with that then..maybe inuyasha's parents are still dead as in the anime. and it would just be him and his older, cold, prefering loneliness brother sesshomaru). and inu/kag, mir/san could go on a ski trip. i hope i helped. please continue. use my ideas (changing them for efficency) if youd like. keep up the good work.
| Reviewed By: kagomeinuyashalover On: December 20, 2003 14:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
its great so far.in the next one inu,kag,sango,miroku should get stuck in a cabin but they start out as bad but still have a good christmas, inu/kag should get under mistletoe.lol.keep going though it's really good.
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