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| "Kagome's Gift" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: supsup On: February 10, 2005 19:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice fic. Except that not many people tend to like too much of another language in what they're reading. Good anyway. In one paragraph -yes, ONE- there was a little mistake. Kaede gave her a cup cup of tea. HUH??? It wasn't the most creative thing in the world, it's quite ordinary, and the kiss was really predictable. It was very fun to read, except for having to go back up to the top at times. But good anyway. I'll give a 9 for an overall rating. It's not perfect, but definetly VERY good! At least for a one-shot, I mean, really! Great and keep up the good work!
| Reviewed By: ChibiKagome13 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2004 14:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was an awsome story it was really sweet and well written and had a little humor wich is always good
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