| "I'll Always be there" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: caynann On: October 09, 2004 01:13 CDT
Comment/Review:
Learn to spell. Your grammer is in serious need of an overhaul, and this seems more like an excuse for gratuitous sex than a story. If you're trying for a romance, then WRITE a romance.
|
Title: Coooool O.O
Reviewed By: Broken_Dreams616 On: July 23, 2004 23:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMFG That's so so, sexy o.o; I love ittttt o_o ;>> it twas magical it twas. me liked the sex scene best lmao. So yea, I give you tops cause it was stone cold wiked o_o yes. me liked it lmao.
|
Title: hello me
Reviewed By: Miaku3499 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2003 18:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
|
